[zthee]

ya!

i just finished this.



i would like to ad a hand on her shoulder, so it looks like he's holding around her from behind. but it was to much of a hassle to draw..

constructive critic appreciated.

(i do like the way that my browser + the .jpg compresion f**ks up the colors)

//zthee

[This message has been edited by zthee (edited September 16, 2000).]

[shardik]

if its a blanket around them u show the folds in the cloth :-D

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[zthee]

thanks for the reply shardik.
but it isnt a blanket, i think they are just wearing black.
i tried to do folds in the cloth before, but it didnt look good. this way i feel its more balance between the smoke and them.

[wootkoos]

It seems to have too much empty space in the middle of the pic. Maybe making the burning buildings a bit larger would even it out and reduce wasted space

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[Nex]

This is a picture that has potential.

If you want to add folds maybe this helps you?:



its very basic but.. I am not an expert on that stuff.

I hope you will finish it soon.. (background?)

[zthee]

darn, i havent been able to reach the forum for a couple of days now..

thanks for the comments guys.
ive tried to work alittle more on the background and on the smoke and on the women+man.



i wish i was able to draw hands on the couple, but im not. so im going to skip that part until i learn. any other suggestions?