[Vassago]

Very early still, NOWHERE near complete.
Blue BG is for composite into CG Scene.
Please let me know if the proportions and shit look okay. Thanks

[General Confusion]

he must be wandering where his hands are

sorry couldn't resist

look at some real life, or some photos. You have to work with the folds of the clothes make them look more like drapes coming off, let's say a couch arm. Don't use the dodge and burn tool for highlights and shade. Designate a light source. His waist is a little too thin for the proportions of his shoulder mass. And define what is going on in the shadow on his face, if the shadow was that heavy to obscure what we are seeing, then the rest of his body would also be obscured.

later

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[ceenda]

General Confusion: booooooooooooooooo!

Anyway, I agree with General Confusion's comments.


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[This message has been edited by ceenda (edited September 15, 2000).]

[YourMum]

Hi!

I roughly agree with General Confusion. Hmm.. Does he wearing skirt? Heh.. I dunno but yes.. I think you should have to shadow it more and give it more texture. I know this is very early pic but I still say it dor you. Sleeves look little bit strange... because of those wrinkles. The biggest thing to make it look greater is that you have to play with shadows much. It looks little bit flattened. But good start!!! Remember it.