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newt
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Ok, my first post. I hope this works.
You guys give some really good feedback, (and I've been on a lot of forums), so if you would, please crit away:
(Don't worry about hurting my feelings, rip away!)
Original sketch:
<img src="http://www.blink-studios.com/art/face_pencil.jpg>
Digital:
<img src="http://www.blink-studios.com/art/face.jpg>
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aquamire
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| Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2000 7:42 am |
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:  op!:: there ya go
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aquamire
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| Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2000 7:44 am |
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Whoah, thats, uh, detailed.. I'm guessing you slapped some textures on it? That's really neat.
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The Dude
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| Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2000 7:44 am |
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I don't have much of a crit, but I wanted
to say that I like the digital version
a lot. It definitely wasn't what I expected
after seeing the sketch, but I was pleasantly
surprised. Keep up the good work!
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newt
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| Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2000 7:52 am |
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Arrgh!
Help!
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| Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2000 10:07 am |
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| all the logic from the initial sketch seems to be lost in the digital rendering. i guess it's because of all the darkness and wild texture, but i think if you were to add more form in the digital one it would turn out real nice. just a suggestion.. it's still neat with that whole chaotic look. |
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