[jasonN]

I don't know if this pic is very suited to the forum but I'll post it up anyway.

A fan fiction writer asked me to draw his main bad guy, so I did. The character design was not by me, so don't ask why he has a bowl haircut. hehehe.



Anyway, any comments or critique is welcome as always.



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-Jason :)

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[Tinusch]

The coloring is good, but the anatomy is killing the pic. The legs should be a little longer, the boots are pointing the wrong directions, one leg looks longer, and one arm is longer. Just tweak the anatomy and it'll look awesome.

[Jenn]

Pretty

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[Isric]

Hehe, why would a Sayin Elite need arm weapons? Sorry, I've seen the whole thing, so I know dragon ball like nuts.
I like the background a lot.

[micke]

Jason, the drawing looks cool and i have to say that you have improved greatly, but the shading don't look right. The guy does'nt have a lightsourceand reminds me a bit of a displacement map. Japanese artist have a simplified way of colouring, but they have
a proper light-source and simplify out from that. You could try to
have a lightsource from underneath or from the side or from the top.You could also just leave the picture with a simple flat-colouring.Hope this can help
-Mikael

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-Mikael Noguchi-

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[jasonN]

Thank you everyone
Tinusch, thanks for pointing that out, I had no idea because I've been looking at the pic too much. Next time I do a pic I'll take this into consideration.

Thanks Jenn, I appreciate it

Isric, I didn't make up the character so don't ask me! I thought it was a little unusual also


Micke, I understand what you mean. I think I just got carried away with putting highlights on everything because I think it looks cool. hehe. Next time I do a pic, I'm going to take into consideration a more dramatic and feasable lighting concept.
And thanks for your compliments, it means a lot!

Thanks again everybody for the great replies.
-Jason