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Speve-o-matic
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Location: Johannesburg, South Africa
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 Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2000 1:12 pm |
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I think it would be a good idea to add some more space to the composition. Make it a wider angled shot.
Anotomy that bugs me off the fly . . . the left eye, the right arm/shoulder in relation to his torso . . . looks slightly wrong.
It has many cool potentials!
On a personal note : Are you studying at SCAD by any chance?
L8r
- Steve
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ZiG
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| Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2000 1:25 pm |
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Thanks Speve-o-matic, the left eye is supposed to have a little glass targeting thing over it. i need to make it bigger and more clear i think.
And ya this will be my 2nd year at SCAD. Working on a computer art major.
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ZiG
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| Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2000 11:10 pm |
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Hey all,
Could you take a look at my anatomy and perspective in this pic? I know there are some pretty big flaws. I'd like to catch and correct them before I go any further. Also hows the composition? Im digging the plane behind him, but that was the end of my ideas. Any ideas on what could go behind that? The little plane in the corner was my sad attempt to a bg... heh Any help would be really appreciated.
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