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Dhabih Administrator
Member # Joined: 13 Sep 1999 Posts: 532 Location: Kirkland, WA, U.S.A.
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 12:48 am |
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"Me", comments below image:
I was inspired by joachim's and micke's self-portraits (both awesome!) to try one myself. I never really liked doing it because its so hard to get it to look like me, but the last time i did one was years ago, so this is my latest attempt. I'm a lot happier with this one than any self-portraits i've done before. I like how the ears and the hair turned out. Feedback welcome!
-dhab
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[This message has been edited by Dhabih (edited September 06, 2000).] |
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Plop member
Member # Joined: 13 May 2000 Posts: 275 Location: Nowhereville
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 12:52 am |
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Nice one spooge.. i mean Dhab. |
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micke member
Member # Joined: 19 Jan 2000 Posts: 1666 Location: Oslo/Norway
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 1:09 am |
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That's really neat! The light that comes from behind looks really cool, the texture on the hair's nice!also love the blue reflection in the eyes. The only crit i have is that the neck looks too cylindrical(maybe it's just me)
Nice to see you posting again.
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Sedone member
Member # Joined: 11 May 2000 Posts: 455 Location: United States
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 1:18 am |
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Hey, another nice portrait. That light makes you seem "angelic", but that could be how you see yourself
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Rinaldo member
Member # Joined: 09 Jun 2000 Posts: 1367 Location: Adelaide, Australia
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 1:21 am |
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Ref?
Super nice I'm sittin' here trying to crit but nothing's happening. Howdya get it sooo smooth! Hair is particuarly well done.
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Joachim member
Member # Joined: 18 Jan 2000 Posts: 1332 Location: Norway
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 1:27 am |
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man you've improved lately! The shading technique, highligting, shapes and everything has improved so much since your 1999 images anc further back.
Great portrait, great colors and shading. Nice lighting and not overdtailed coloring and shadows like mine ..I think I gotta do a new one
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BooMSticK member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2000 Posts: 927 Location: Copenhagen, Denmark
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 1:34 am |
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my my...
Thats really great... I'll double Joachim on his statement. You've improved very much in the last few months. This one and the last picture you posted here shows how much...
great to have you back more...
,B
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waylon member
Member # Joined: 05 Jul 2000 Posts: 762 Location: Milwaukee, WI US
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 1:36 am |
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Wow, that's really nice. Good color, good detail, good everything! Though you look like you need more sleep. And more sunlight.
The only thing that looks a bit strange to me is the shadow your hair is casting on your forehead... I think because of the color you used, it looks more like darker skin than shadow. But that's only after I've stared at it for about five minutes, so my eyes may just be playing tricks on me.
Very nice! |
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Dhabih Administrator
Member # Joined: 13 Sep 1999 Posts: 532 Location: Kirkland, WA, U.S.A.
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 1:39 am |
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I think you're right micke... i took the mirror down already, but i tried to fix it a bit more...i think its a little less cylindrical now....what do you think?
the original is at:
[url=http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/gallery/!self_portrait.jpg]http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/gallery/!self_portrait.jpg[/url]
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MaLoRuM member
Member # Joined: 05 Aug 2000 Posts: 208 Location: Okazaki, Japan
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 1:48 am |
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im Scared of you, your too good... *runs and hides* i think your about to jump outta that pic it looks so real!
im left with only one statement.. "gahharrbbluubbblub blub oooohhh puuurrttyyy"
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DuKEZ member
Member # Joined: 03 Nov 1999 Posts: 317 Location: BayArea
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 2:23 am |
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nice pic dhabih, the textures in the background reminds me of dustbowl TFC.. alot of light orange/brownish sand color :P
too much tf2 for you? :P |
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jasonN member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 842 Location: Sydney Australia
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 2:28 am |
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Wow, that's a great pic
I especially like the way you recreated the short shaved hair on the side of you head. Very convincing!
Facial hair looks cool too. heheh
The whole pic is very slick
-jason
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 3:04 am |
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Just saw your image in the gallery Dhab! Very nice....I really like the lighting! very cool....of to work now. |
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Binke member
Member # Joined: 27 Oct 1999 Posts: 1194 Location: Sweden
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Blind member
Member # Joined: 09 Dec 1999 Posts: 263 Location: Mooresville, NC
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 6:49 am |
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Damn nice pic, Dhabih... I especially like how you colored the ear where the light comes through a little. Very realistic. The eyes, too. Great work...
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Chapel member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 7:29 am |
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Dhabih Administrator
Member # Joined: 13 Sep 1999 Posts: 532 Location: Kirkland, WA, U.S.A.
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 12:44 pm |
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Well, thanks for the feedback,
micke : you were right, i changed the neck to be less cylindrical.
Sedone: what do you mean? i AM an angel. :P hehe
waylon: You might be right...although there was a soft shadow under the hair, the way i drew it came out a bit blurry, so its hard to see what going on
anyway, appreciate the comments and feedback...i hope not to do a self portrait again for a long time they are HARD!
-dhab
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Jenn member
Member # Joined: 25 Jul 2000 Posts: 1055 Location: Melbourne, VIC, OZ
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 1:19 pm |
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Are you going to post a photo so we can go off it ?? -cheeky grin-
Nice work. Maybe someoen can do one of me one day
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AprilYSH member
Member # Joined: 26 Jan 2000 Posts: 136 Location: Perth, WA, Australia
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 5:12 pm |
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i still don't get how you guys can churn out photo real stuff from block painting base, and so fast at it too. geeze, this is great.
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 5:12 pm |
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Hey that's nice. The hair looks great... When you're doing designs and concepts for Valve, do they look like this or do you tighten them up more, like the Arbiter pic? Just curious as to what game companies look for in concept art and designs...
Oh, and is it just me, or does the face look a little skewed? Like the chin is in the wrong spot?
Awesome pic as usual. Your style is getting even better. It's a totally different technique but it still has that soft feel to it like your other pics. Awesome. Awesome. |
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Dhabih Administrator
Member # Joined: 13 Sep 1999 Posts: 532 Location: Kirkland, WA, U.S.A.
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 6:54 pm |
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Tinusch: at work, the concepts are rarely "finished" looking....since ideas are refined and changed, its better not to spend too much time on each idea...also since i gotta churn out a lot, i dont want to spend a few days on one thing
also about the chin....uhm...thats actually how it is, i have an underbite....i got braces last year and will get surgery the end of this year because i have TMJ (slipped disc between upper and lower jaw)....so if i do a self portrait next year, it will look a bit different and the chin wont look skewed. heehehe
-dhab
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shahar2k member
Member # Joined: 01 Jun 2000 Posts: 867 Location: Oak Park CA USA
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2000 7:09 pm |
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don't wanna make a bad comment here, not without a photo better than the one on your front page, but it seems the nose is a bit too big... I do quite a few self portraits (happen to have a mirror for a closet door in this house, so it's easy drawing while looking) they are mostly quick, but I alway exagerate the length of my face, you'll probably end up exagerating something in your face as well, but then again, it's art not photography
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