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Visp
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Hi here is another pic i did. So critisize away.
I had some trouble of finding out what to fill in in the background. Any suggestions?
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Flexible Elf
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| Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2000 2:52 pm |
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I like it..
for the background you could add a giant winged demon or creature in the same pose as the sorcerer... slightly illuminated by the lightning.. it could be a totem, communion with some Thunder god.. or maybe something the sorcerer holds dominion over.. like a giant puppet of doom. BWAHAHAHAHA!!
**Thundercrackle**
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Tinusch
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| Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2000 5:59 pm |
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| I think the lightning should be BRIGHT. Much brighter than you made it. Make it solid white, but make it glow light blue. Maybe make the glow more intense and bright, too. Just to give the pic more power and impact. |
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sh4de
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| Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2000 11:38 pm |
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those clouds look really good.
really hmm.. stormy. 
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Matt Elder
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| Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2000 3:18 am |
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I like it. One slight problem is that it took me a while to figure it out (and I'm still not 100% sure). Is that a little wizard type dude or something as it is hard to tell.
The only other thing is there might be a little too much dead space with so much black. May I suggest putting in more clouds or somehow not making the image so high in the vertical direction.
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BooMSticK
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| Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2000 4:50 am |
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Hey visp
Pretty cool image. I agree with the others on most things, but I really like how you lighten up the clouds around the lighting. Might wanna make the lightning less even and put some more detail in it all over the pic.. Could turn out really cool!
and-eh! welcome aboard...
;Boom
Jacek, are you danish? I noticed your link to ITE. do you work in Copenhagen?
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Visp
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| Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2000 1:08 pm |
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Thanks for the critics guys. Great Idea about the deamon or something in the back. thanks for that Flexible elf. 
Hi BooMStick yeah i live in copenhagen. Mail me if you want we�ll chat
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Originally posted by BooMSticK:
Hey visp
Pretty cool image. I agree with the others on most things, but I really like how you lighten up the clouds around the lighting. Might wanna make the lightning less even and put some more detail in it all over the pic.. Could turn out really cool!
and-eh! welcome aboard...
;Boom
Jacek, are you danish? I noticed your link to ITE. do you work in Copenhagen?
[This message has been edited by Visp (edited September 03, 2000).] |
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