[ceenda]

Sorry folks, I took the pic out - it really sucked...

[This message has been edited by ceenda (edited August 23, 2000).]

[Flexible Elf]

put it back! put it back!

-Flexible Elf

[nightmare]

what what?! YOU think your art isn't good enough to put here? thats not true! even i have posted a primitive and possibly blindingly bad picture i made (although no one replied to it). don't be fooled into thinking any picture to isn't good enough to show us!

[aquamire]

Come on Ceenda, surely its better than this:



I spent 4 hours on it, and used a photo for reference.


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[balistic]

/me busts a nut



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[ceenda]

Okay, here it is.

[Rinaldo]

How do we know that's the original. HUH! Prove it Mr

I can see why one would maybe think it has room for improvement but it is certanly not worthless.
Maybe if you had a ship in the foreground that takes up a fair amount of room and then had similar ships getting smaller and smaller until they are tiny when close to the floating island. have a docking bay or something with these tiny ships comeing out.
Just a suggestion. put whatever cool creature/ship design thing you come up with in place of "ship"

L8r

[ceenda]

When I first put the pic up I realised later that it contained nearly everything I'm trying to get away from.

I know absolutely nothing about form etc. having not been to art school but I would like my pics to have better composition and form.

The mountain itself just looks so flat and 2D and the city may as well be a cardboard cut out.

Nope, I'm really disappointed with that one.

aquamire: lol! That's quite sweet actually.

[el tigre]

Ceenda, it looks ok as it is, but this is what I'd do....

Draw the whole thing form a lower perspective so that you're looking up at it's sheer vastness. (draw a kid, bloke or blokette to show the scale )

I'd change the colour too, but thats personal taste, I think they're too intense, Watery colours are my scene.

my thrupenny bit!

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[JayBee]

Ceenda, you know this is a good pic, I know this is a good pic...

Hey, I'VE even posted here, so I'd be worried if you thought your stuff wasn't good enough

Oh, and does anyone else think Aquamire's pic has a whole sinister thing going on? Those eyes freak me out, man, and the kiddiness of the pic makes it even more unnerving...


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[aquamire]

You said that sucked? If you ask me, thats actually quite nice. Yeah, it has its flaws, but so does everyone else's. I personally think thats a damn good start. Dont ever stop posting stuff, even if it is 'sucky'. People on the forum can help make it 'un-sucky'.

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