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Binke member
Member # Joined: 27 Oct 1999 Posts: 1194 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Sun Aug 13, 2000 6:32 pm |
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Hey ho, welllll I wanted to try out drawing a underwater picture, since I had not done that before (cept some small speed pic thingy) and this is how it came out.
The sub is kind of futuristic, didnt use any reference for the sub (obviously looks like a hybrid of a shark & a spaceship)
The sub is on a deep level, so no sunray-reflections.
Ack I really suck at painting fishes, tried looking at some reference, but it went blah.
Oh yeah, thanks Frost, for some helpful feedback! =)
It's done in Photoshop & painted at the res you see here. And well, how did I do, how did I do?!
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[This message has been edited by Binke (edited August 13, 2000).] |
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EviLToYLeT member
Member # Joined: 09 Aug 2000 Posts: 1216 Location: CA, USA
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Posted: Sun Aug 13, 2000 6:45 pm |
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Looks pretty good. I like the way you make the smaller craft look like its moving. Hrmm....but something about that big sub looks a bit strange.. I can't figure it out though. Think it might be because the back of the sub looks more defined than the front... other than that.. i like it a lot. BTW, try to paint within the canvas... hehe can see you went outside into the black area  |
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Golongria member
Member # Joined: 08 Mar 2000 Posts: 242 Location: Albuquerque, NM, USA
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Posted: Sun Aug 13, 2000 7:05 pm |
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Ack...post the full res. version all i see is blue...a couple of blurry subs and a bunch of wavy yet blurry lines...
-matt |
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Sun Aug 13, 2000 7:09 pm |
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That's awesome. I think the perspective on the big sub is a bit off in the front, but other than that, it looks great. |
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psi burn member
Member # Joined: 14 May 2000 Posts: 420 Location: nj
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Posted: Sun Aug 13, 2000 7:48 pm |
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this is beautiful, i love the light effect underwater |
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nori member
Member # Joined: 01 Apr 2000 Posts: 500 Location: Los Angeles, CA
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Posted: Sun Aug 13, 2000 10:17 pm |
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cooool. I like how the ocean floor looks. Way cool. And the fish are great. I want to stab and then eat the fish.. and the ocean floor. |
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rdgraffix member
Member # Joined: 21 Jul 2000 Posts: 299 Location: Australia
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Posted: Sun Aug 13, 2000 11:37 pm |
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Great pic Binke. The glowing lights really make it work and give it a real 'underwater' feel, as if thay're illuminating countless microscopic floating particles.
Beautiful.
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Binke member
Member # Joined: 27 Oct 1999 Posts: 1194 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2000 6:35 am |
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appriciate the comments!
Eviltoylet: Woops, I guess I went outside the canvas there ehum..Hm.. yeah I dunno, I didnt know what more to add to the front.
Golongria: Uhm, this is the full res, it is a dark blue pic, but I can see all the details, maybe adjust brightness/contrast? I know my own gamma is a bit forked but oh well.
Tinusch: Thanks! I don't know I asked Frost about the perspective, and it looked ok I guess =)
psiburn: Aye, I think the lamps really added the effect. thanks.
nori,rdgraffix: Gracias heh, although I dont think the fishes turned out that well.
And sorry if the pic is too dark
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Joachim member
Member # Joined: 18 Jan 2000 Posts: 1332 Location: Norway
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2000 6:46 am |
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looks very nice Binke, like said earlier, you are improving like hell.
Comments,
You should try to add some small detail variation to the sub and maybe some small lights or something to make the sub marine seem alot bigger.
Also, remove the fishes, they are cute, but makes you feel that you are inside a fish bowl more than in a open big sea. And, maybe also remove the ground you've made, it makes the whole setting a bit small, instead, make a ground further away, like if the submarine was far more above the ground. Maybe with some really vague mountains behind, so you really get that "epic" feel to it.
Agree ? Or not
Anyway, very nice work !
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Frost member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 2662 Location: Montr�al, Canada
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2000 6:57 am |
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Hey Binke!
Looks nice, like the way you finished it up! =) What Joachim said is very true, you are rapidly improving, it's amazing. =))
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Golongria member
Member # Joined: 08 Mar 2000 Posts: 242 Location: Albuquerque, NM, USA
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2000 7:57 am |
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Hmm...my computer is being wierd...it's been making the loading image on the first page after the intro on dhabis page look very blurry as well..
-Matt |
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Binke member
Member # Joined: 27 Oct 1999 Posts: 1194 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2000 8:09 am |
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Joachim: Thanks! Great comments & suggestion, I agree a 100% on that! Actually the first version, did not have any closeup fishes, nor did it have a seaground, because I wanted it to look, like it was down very deep down you know. But I sent it around to a few people on my icq, and most of them thought that a seafloor & some fishes would be cool.
I will remove those blah fishes & try adding some vague background mountains instead, thanks again!
Frost: Thanks, your comments on ICQ was very helpfull! Hope I dont disturb you too much haha
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Wildkat junior member
Member # Joined: 29 Nov 2001 Posts: 8 Location: us of a
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2000 1:16 pm |
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aww.... come on.. keep the fishies..  |
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ex member
Member # Joined: 23 Mar 2000 Posts: 887 Location: USA
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2000 3:26 pm |
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Keep the fishes, but just make it look like they are fleeing from the subs. that'd look cool
great image... try and make the sub on the right (our right) look like its moving more.. thats what your going for right? and how about some plants? we wouldent want those fishies to die would we? put some coral, that'd be really cool dude. great image. |
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Binke member
Member # Joined: 27 Oct 1999 Posts: 1194 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2000 3:37 pm |
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thanks, and actually, it's supposed to... look like its still heh, hence the air bubbles that are going straight up. Ah well I'm remaking it a bit now, will probably not post it buuuuuuuut anyway
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Member # Joined: 23 Mar 2000 Posts: 887 Location: USA
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2000 6:34 pm |
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did you say that to tease us? you know we want to see the remaked version - you better post it... or else - i dunno |
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Plop member
Member # Joined: 13 May 2000 Posts: 275 Location: Nowhereville
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2000 7:03 pm |
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Hey Binke, i just looked at your url!
Say hi to Vibol I'm the guy who was going to do your site but never got around to it
Didn't know one of you was a member here. |
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Binke member
Member # Joined: 27 Oct 1999 Posts: 1194 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2000 5:35 am |
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ex: hehe
Plop: I have no friggin idea what you are talking about hehe. If you mean the Gamesquad crew, I do not know Vibol. And "your site" I guess you mean Gamesquads site, and not MY site?
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