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emirin
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 Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2000 8:18 am |
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ok Hello...I am emirin...I am new here as you might know......this a sketch I did that I wanted to post and get some C&C on before I finished it off.....so...
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Joachim
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| Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2000 9:06 am |
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Welcome emirin,
Nice sketch you have. I'm not really into this manga stuff, but for ultra cute manga style it looks nice. One small thing though, she's a bit out of balance. Leaning a bit too much over. If her upper body leans to the right, as you probably want, her torso and legs should give the feel of some counterweight. Hmm, I don't know how to spell it right, but I hope you see what I mean ?!?
Anyway, welcome !
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emirin
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| Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2000 9:12 am |
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| ya I totaly see what you mean...thanks for the advice...and I am glad I could be shown to a board with so many people giving helpfull cretiques |
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Kain Victus
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| Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2000 10:26 am |
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Hi, Nice sketch.. However I really think you should resixe her feet. they are way to big. Also the right foot is suppose to be behind her left, yet it is 2x bigger, it really throws off the proportion. Ahwell, just my gripes with it. Do what you like!
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hennifer
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| Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2000 11:44 pm |
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hey, thats a pretty nice anime sketch. you might want to play with your contrast/brightness settings when scanning it get a cleaner scanned image. also, her shoulders look a little sloped/deformed. most anime girls have really good poster. 
and one VERY important thing not really related to your image:
when you're submitting a reply or a topic, don't double-click the 'submit' button. if you do, you'll get double replies/threads. with a board this busy, there's no use in adding extra load to the server.
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emirin
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| Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2000 11:48 pm |
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| sorry my mac is reacting weird with this board.... |
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