[Kyri]

Hi,
I posted this pic here quite a while ago, at an early stage in it's developement. I put it on the back burner for quite a while now, with intentions to come back to it at a later time a little unsure where to go with it.
There are still problems with the
perspective and I think the background lacks depth and is not too inventive...it's not all I had hoped for it, but I think I will say it is finnished. Comments are welcome.



[This message has been edited by Kyri (edited August 13, 2000).]

[Nex]

Hi!

Great one.. but I think the composition could be better.

maybe like this:



the characters should be more in center.. now the wall uses 2/3 of the space and the main figures only 1/3... Just my opinion.

Nice mood and cool style going on there.
i really dig the wall cool texture.

Any plans for additional background yet?

hey what the hell?! this creature whas not up there before.. you really scared me!



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[Kyri]

Oops, sorry bout that Nex, I posted the old one first by mistake didn't mean to scare you. ;P Heh, heh,

[Nex]

lol

forget this stuff i wrote above then .. with the alienkindathing there the composition is a lot better and (scarier )

[aquamire]

Wow, Kyri, thats fuckin awesome! I love the dark gothic feel to it.

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[Nightime]

This is awesome! I especially love the detail in the wall and the creature.

Hmm, the only thing I have trouble reading is the depth of the large man by the female -- is he behind or in front of her?

JJ

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[Xcal]

Killer pic, Kyri. Almost has a Clive Barker feel to it. That creature is almost a twin of a concept drawing I did a while back for one of my projects. I think we had similar inspirations?

Here's a link:

http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/loth/j/s/jsin/monster_copy.jpg.html


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[Kyri]

Hiya,
Thanks Nex, Aquamire, Nightime and Xcal I'm glad you like it.

Nightime the perspecive on the guy and gal are very confusing, and I have had a lot of trouble with it. I'm not sure if it quite works but the guy is supposed to be crouched down in front with the gal walking her doggie along in the background, heh, heh. ;P
Xcal I saw your pic and I think it is excellent! I think there are a lot of similarities with our two creatures, kinda spooky...are you sure you are not reading my mind...heh. I like Clive Barkers writing
and Hellraiser movie is a favourite, did you spot the title of my pic, heh, heh.
Cheers,

Kyri

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[Wildkat]

Cute Doggy!
He's a great addition to the setting and love the chain...

Awesome pic Kyri!

[Kyri]

Hi Kat Thanks, I'm glad you like it

[Joachim]

Looks good Kyri. Very dark and eviiil
I agree a bit the composition stuff.

Btw, do you wish to become the Crow or something. Everything you do is so dark. Be happy, next assignment: draw some flowers ok ?

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