[emirin]

ok Hello...I am emirin...I am new here as you might know......this a sketch I did that I wanted to post and get some C&C on before I finished it off.....so...

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I like the style of this pic, especially her hair, good job on her hands too It isnt too disimilar to my pic I submitted http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/Forum2/HTML/003797.html

C&C ... What does that stand for ? Critique & c_____ ?

Colour this pic and submit it again , and maybe make the boots a tiny bit smaller.

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[Virotype]

Very nice. It looks well thought out and most proportions seems right. Good job. I only noticed two things that looked kind of odd -

1. Her right hands seems to be hanging from the ring rather than holding it.. I don't know if there is more scene you havent finished yet, but if she is holding the ring, I would suggest closing her fingers more

2. Her shoes seem too big for her body size.. this may be the style of the anime, but they are way too oversized heh


Otherwise, keep up the good work!

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- Virotype
http://www.phantommx.com

[emirin]

wow somebody noticed the hand.....and the boots are large because that is how the origial artist drew them...and I wanted to keep with the feel of the game..

[emirin]

wow somebody noticed the hand.....and the boots are large because that is how the origial artist drew them...and I wanted to keep with the feel of the game..