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Nex member
Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2000 Posts: 2086 Location: Austria
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2000 4:43 pm |
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Hi!
This is a bit off topic.. but it is digital art so lets just jump over this small into and come to the point.
Some weeks ago I did a photoshooting with my band on various locations.
I have a photo arrangement here. What do you think of it, what would be other options (we would like to keep a kind of "alternative" styling) to style it.
It is thought to be a part of a splash image.
would really be happy about input.. or anything.
Does this look cheap? Would you do it different?
This is the composition yet:
btw .. can you guess which of this goodlooking people is me?
[This message has been edited by Nex (edited August 14, 2000).] |
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Fred Flick Stone member
Member # Joined: 12 Apr 2000 Posts: 745 Location: San Diego, Ca, USA
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2000 5:11 pm |
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Nex-hola...Been posting a lot lately. Good to see...with this, the thing that bugs me is that you have various color photos with flats over them, and still, there is color competing with the flats you chose.
I would, if you want to keep the color arrangement, turn each of the photos into a duotone supporting the respective color in each panel. THat way you end up with a harmonious image, with one consistency pulling all the separate photos together.
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Guy member
Member # Joined: 29 Feb 2000 Posts: 602 Location: British Columbia, Canada
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2000 5:44 pm |
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your the middle one :P |
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samdragon member
Member # Joined: 05 May 2000 Posts: 487 Location: Indianapolis
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2000 6:38 pm |
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Hope you don't mind me tinkering with your photostuff, but here is something to think about.
See if you notice any other changes, aside from the color..I overlaped some of the images alittle bit, elbow here, tree trunk there, shadow over there. Kinda helps tie it all together, after all, it is a band right?
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Nex member
Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2000 Posts: 2086 Location: Austria
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2000 2:03 am |
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Fred: you you are right. But my "holidays" are over today so my posting ammount will greatly be reduced (to a more bearable ammount)
[..and there was happyness among them ]
good idea, I will try it with the duotone, thanks.
Guy: How did you know?
samdragon: Looks cool this way. Maybe I will add some "old photo artefacts" and try it out.
Thanks for your comments guys.
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Danny member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2000 Posts: 386 Location: Alcyone, Pleiadians
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2000 3:28 am |
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Duotones can be really nice indeed.
One other thing I would keep in mind is the contrast in each of the images. If you compare for instance the shot of the dude on the left with the dude on the right, there is a world of diffirence in contrast. With the first one having too little of it and the latter one too much. I think if you'd balance that out a bit more you'll end up with even more harmony as Fred spoke off.
Nex, you strike me as a leather pants figure, I say you're behind door number 5..
Danny
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mantis member
Member # Joined: 03 Jun 2000 Posts: 359 Location: NJ/USA
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2000 5:09 am |
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I am hoping you are not any of the fools wearing leather pants. WoW they look goofy.
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zapman member
Member # Joined: 26 Feb 2000 Posts: 354 Location: USA
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2000 5:54 am |
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look at the face, look at the face!
more color.
You have it right, no need to change it, (on less you like the below image hehe)
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Danny member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2000 Posts: 386 Location: Alcyone, Pleiadians
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2000 8:37 am |
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Heh... that looks like jpeg errors zapman..
Danny
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Darkmoon member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2000 Posts: 279 Location: Atlanta. GA.
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2000 9:13 am |
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just personal opinion, i like this... cause that red boa was makin my eyes hurt
ps, i think your #1 in this photo.
-Lisa
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Nex member
Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2000 Posts: 2086 Location: Austria
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2000 9:44 am |
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Thanks all of you for you great input!
Danny: Sorry, but door number five was the Tiger *Roarr*
mantis: Nope, I am the guy totally to the left with the strange look on his face
Zapman, Darkmoon: thanks for taking the time to fiddle around with this. It's really appreciated.
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If we record a CD in the near future I will send you guys a free copy if you want one.
thanks again
Cya
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Fat Assasin member
Member # Joined: 15 Aug 2000 Posts: 92 Location: Van Nuys, CA, USA
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2000 10:23 am |
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My $0.02... I like the color version because it has more life than a straight duotone, but I think you can put even more energy into it. So I messed around with it a bit and this is what I came up with. I work as a graphic designer so I do this kind of stuff all day.
Moving the pictures around adds motion, as do the lines. And the lines also focus the viewers eyes on the faces, like zapman said, but also ties all the pictures together. Plus I played with the contrasts and toned down the blue pic.
Good luck with the band!
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