[above]

please do what you do best and critique this image....how i can make it better, if you like or dislike the colors, etc. It was done in 30 minutes no reference was used, started from a doodle. And I appreciate all comments, you guys and girls are the best.

welp here it comes



have fun

[Nex]

I think the problem with this one may be that it has no real defined light source.

The light is coming from the front for most of the parts of the face but not for the helmet.

But I am not the lighting pro either so this might as well be wrong what I said.

Proportions look ok to me.

[psi burn]

it looks like a little kid who bought one of those toy space helmets.....is that what you were going for?

[ex]

"Mommy! It won't come off!"
"Mommy is on the phone honey, wait until i'm off and don't be rude." **while your mom says this through her gringing teeth she gives you a dirty look, the kind that says your dead when i get off this phone**

I't kinda looks like your trying to imitate micke's (isint that how to spell it?) style... or maybe its just that your charector has the same little grin that micke's, portriate was it, did. NIce overall job, but i agree with ... whoever that said that the lighting may be a little screwy... i'm sure its trickey, but you look like you have alot of potential - Good luck scotty! Thank you - I'm ready - Beam me in! (an American thing)