[proximo]

Did these at work today .. let me know what you think .. im still working on the style .. so ummm yah lots of stuff wrong with them ohh well eheh ..


later..

[proximo]

Im not trying to boost my thred but was just wondering if you guys could tear these up and tell me what i should do to improve on my next ones .. etc.. thanks ..

[Loki]

I like the cleaness of the drawings, the shading is clear and underlines and refines the subjects.
The space-fighter is a little bit too geometrical for my taste. You can see the primitives that it's been constructed from.

The character is pretty cool, but the gun looks a little bit too cumbersome and heavy - so does the backpack - it seems to pull the poor guy back ... but - it's still aeons better than when I try drawing a character (whatever that means )

Keep on rocking ... we want to see at least three new conceptual sketches every second day !

[sh4de]

nothing to bitch about really, nice sketches.
well there is some. dont like the shadow behind the guy and what the hell is that hanging from the gun? =)
shading is really nice

[proximo]

Thanks guys , like i said im trying to get this style down , i can see that the gun would make him fall forward while falling back eheh .. he might snap in half ! eheh .. and ill have the new sketches tomarrow ! eheh or maybe today ..

as far as what is hangen from the gun .. umm they are these things that umm yah .. i really dont now , they somhow ended up thereeheh ..

Anyhow thnks again guys, ill incorporate what you have mentioned in the next ones..

loki , whats up with everyone meeting up ? anyhow just thought i would ask ..

Later..