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proximo · member Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2000 Posts: 467

Well this image was HEAVLY inspiard by Vortex, umm as you can see, i just love that style and want to get better at it , so while i was drawing this one i was looking at Vortexes and seeing all the little things that make it so nice

hope you dont mind Vortex

.. but its still no ware even near vortexes so ohh well eheh tell me what you think..

Talk to you later....

proximo · member Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2000 Posts: 467

ohh yah forgot to add this one in ..

its not shaded in .. anyhow late..

Mergatroid · Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2000 7:05 pm

Its Mergatroid again and gonna chime in real quick. I can see alittle of the underdrawing on the head but I would go back to it again and double check it. Somehow the head feels alittle small but it might be because of the hair. Try one without the hair and out in the center line and brow line. After that I would try a pay close attention to the gesture of your character, in that I think it could still be pushed alittle more.

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Manik Monkei · Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2000 7:11 pm

Pretty nice. It strikes me as a bit flat, because all the equipment, guns, etc are facing completely sideways. Nice job though (I think she needs a face

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If you do another one, try to think of the equipment more three-dimensionally, instead of just profiles.

Just my 2 cents. Sorry, carry on

proximo · member Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2000 Posts: 467

i toltaly agree with you guys ! .. iv been drawing like a mad mas for the past few weeks trying new styles and crap like that .. iv been trying to get somthing like this style but could not get what i wanted and then i saw vortex and i did this one .. well i did one b4 this one also .. and ill most likly do more of them eheh so thanks for the input guys it really helps ..