[Frost]

Hey Poxen.

I don't think it's as much what ELSE should you put on there, but to make what you have on there speak better.

Hmm, unfortunately, I'm not a pro at image composition, but I can point out the things that I see wrong with this if you want...

The most striking thing I see when I look at it the dominance of pure deep black. It might work 'ok' in the hair, but the face shouldn't be so contrasted, especially since the ambiant light should be more like the color and value of your background.

The ear is a little high, even though it's pointy. I assume he's a werewolf person of some sort, with the ears, eyes, and blood. -- something I might do is copy off Bisley's LOBO pic where he is biting his bottom lip and a nice drop of blood drips from the puncture (showing a tad bit of teeth there). If he would look at the viewer, it might be more menacing, and you could better define a cat-like vertical and oval pupil (if that was the goal). Adding a bit more facial hair, basically growing into the skin more animal like might also help, instead of having the standard human beard-type...

Hope this helped.
cheers!

[poxen]

Hay..
I have made a pic here...my problem is that iam stucked...what mor can i put on it? I have tested backgrounds but...i cant make one who fits....i have been looking for my stile very long now....and my dream is that i some day will wake upp and have my head filled with idees. And when i paint i will do it with my head clear and consentrated on what i think my self! but its hard...for me!

Ohh..hehe..lost my self there!
Heres the pic!


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[poxen]

Thanx....
Very helpfull tips there....

Yea, the darks i a bit to much, a problem making a backround....maby i should put some some more colours to it, and match a background to that...making it more alive. And a bettter face expresion "wilder" whould make it even better...

Thanx Frost!!

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