[henrik]

Well this is not exactly a new piece, but at least it's something...
I feel there's something missing in it, but what? It doesn't feel like it's finished.
Feel free to give me some feedback. What can be refined?



And as usual, the IMG thing will probably not work, though I'm sure it's correct. Here's the link. Drag it into your address bar...
http://hermes.spaceports.com/~penk/exploring.jpg
http://go.to/penk

[Tinusch]

Dude, that's really good. Awesome job. I agree that something's missing though. I think it could use something on the bottom to balance it out a bit. Maybe a person standing there with his arms up? I'm thinking that might look pretty cool. Just an idea.

[Impaler]

The light falloff seems to be too short for the amount of light coming through that gap.

Also that little red light in the corner should be casting a bit more light. Maybe have it awash in a red light, revealing a fine texturing.

One last niggle. What's the stuff hanging off the ship? Loose cords? Foliage?

Overall, it's a great piece. I especially love the complexity of the stalactites/stalagmites/cave teeth and how they seem to be pointing to the vessel. Yummy.

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