Sijun Forums :: View topic - revised pick

zleog · Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2000 8:12 pm

Posted this pick before and fixed up. Thanks for the previous comments. Any further comments would be appreciated.

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Nex · Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2000 12:12 am

a lot better than the first one.. and even though the bg is very simple its works for me somehow.

okay now crit. level 2:

the metal materials in the scene don't look really metal (sword, nuchaku's chains, Wire? )

The wire could use some.. "bump" texture too.. look at real wires or power lines (if that is what he is gliding down) for reference.

but you got it down now pretty good

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MikeMagic · Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2000 9:54 am

Echt cool Alter.
Verdammt gute Arbeit

Nex · Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2000 12:26 pm

He is from Harleysville, PA as he states, why do you think he understands german?

zleog · Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2000 8:17 pm

Do not underestimate me, Nex. I can pick up "gute" and "cool."

Is this any better? I tried to work on the sword. How do you go about making an object appear metal?

The picture has been broken lately. Geocities having some problems.

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DeathbyDuplicity · member Member # Joined: 29 Jun 2000 Posts: 183

Zleog, the arm he is sliding with is kinda incorrect, I can't tell where the elbow is. Also I think the sparks should have a bit more glow to it! Is his face puposely shadowed like that or is it supposed to be from the drop of his hair? Again with light, where's that purple light coming form, it's on both legs, his ass, and arm!

It's pretty cool though, reminds me of one of dem sat mourning cartoons.

MikeMagic · Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2000 12:42 pm

Hi all

Yeah,i now that someone can have some problems to understand the german language, but - i get so amazed !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
To talk in german was the first thing wich came in my mind (LOL).
Okay let me sait again in English.

Its cool man..........damn good job !!!!
But i think this is more than only a good job, its - fine, fantastic, nice,......and more.

Okay somebody, i now that my english is not so good, maybe your german is as better as my english (lol).

Okay let me end here, some nice greets from germany to all in this forum.

MikeMagic