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Eudoxus
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 Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2000 5:55 pm |
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People, fellow artists of this forum, meet my latest effort, Angela Dotchin. One very sexy Kiwi. Please give this work critique, for I am but a lowly player...
...I like Manga!!
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Transcendence
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| Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2000 6:06 pm |
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something about it reminds me of beavis and butthead...but hey, i can't even establish that with a mouse. You might want to try blending the lighter sections with the darker sections so it doesnt had as much of a blotchy look
[This message has been edited by Transcendence (edited July 10, 2000).] |
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lotor
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| Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2000 7:00 pm |
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First thing I thought of was Boticelli's "Birth of Venus".
Unique style of work man. Props |
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Lukias
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| Posted: Thu Jul 13, 2000 4:01 pm |
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Hey Exodus, if you ever come back to this post...tell me, where abouts in NZ do you hail from. I saw the name Angela Dotchin and thought....wha thfuck, knowing I was the only one who new who the hell she was. I'm surprised to see another kiwi about.
till then. Later |
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mantis
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| Posted: Thu Jul 13, 2000 5:33 pm |
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| I like your style but you need to work on the lighting of the pic and establish more detail. The entire thing looks like it was blasted with a spotlight. The colors are too solid and she needs more detail on her hair and some other parts of her body. On this kind of picture I would also suggest to make the background considerably darker than the foreground. If you fix those problems, the pic would be quite good. |
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Eudoxus
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| Posted: Thu Jul 13, 2000 8:09 pm |
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Hey Lukias , sorry to dissappoint you, but i'm from the 'Western Island' You know, Australia. Sydney to be precise.
On the lighter side half of my family are New Zealanders. (BOO) I got a refernce pic of Angela Dotchin from a one of my scabby Ralph mags.
cheers!
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n8
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| Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2000 5:35 am |
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| wooo...go sydney!!...yay...hehehe...nice to see a fellow sidneysider ere =) |
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