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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2000 5:59 pm |
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Another new pic. I spent about 10 hours on this in Photoshop. Any feedback would be cool.
Click on the pic to see the full-sized image. (1024x768)
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Brain member
Member # Joined: 26 Oct 1999 Posts: 662 Location: Brisbane, Australia
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Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2000 7:55 pm |
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Dude, your style rules so much! Keep up the great work!! @:-)
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DeathbyDuplicity member
Member # Joined: 29 Jun 2000 Posts: 183
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Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2000 8:19 pm |
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The hair on this picture is fucking splended! I'm liking this image Tinusch! Is that a hand sandwich or tuna? Speaking of hands his right (our left) is kinda wonky and that stain on his shirt looks like a moniter defect! I tried for 3 minutes to rub it off with my thumb! Other than that damn cool!
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Nex member
Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2000 Posts: 2086 Location: Austria
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Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2000 11:27 pm |
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thats so damn cool! Great one
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Speve-o-matic member
Member # Joined: 25 Jun 2000 Posts: 198 Location: Johannesburg, South Africa
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2000 4:53 am |
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Great picture . . . the only thing that really worries me though is the shadow being cast by the box. It seems a bit unnatural.
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Steve
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Frost member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 2662 Location: Montr�al, Canada
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2000 7:37 am |
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Hey Tinusch.
Funny pic. =) What is he so upset about? Is that some gruesome meat mold in that sandwich? =)
Here are some comments..
The shadows for the obejcts on the shelves are wrong I'm afraid. The gradient from should be darker in the corner where the box+shelf+wall meet (because there is less light refracted in that area, less bounce light reaching the deep corner), and it should be a bit darker along the edge of the box if the light is from that angle.
The boy looks a bit like a wooden puppet from some Russian folklore thing... (no offense, it adds style=)
I think the shadows in general should be sharper, depending on the lights around... just giving it more definition. A shadow on his torso/abdomen coming from his left arm/sleeve could have done some good.
Since the light is coming from the right side of the image, I would have made the lighting/gradient on the wall be darker on the left than on the right... it's currently the opposite (even though it's subtle).
Hey, it's a nice pic, and it's nice to see you spending so much time working hard at it... very dedicated - it's great! =))
It reminds me a bit of a demo scene artist called Lazur.
cheers!
frost.
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nori member
Member # Joined: 01 Apr 2000 Posts: 500 Location: Los Angeles, CA
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2000 9:12 am |
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Gambit member
Member # Joined: 01 Jul 2000 Posts: 213 Location: Las Vegas, NV, USA
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2000 3:10 pm |
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You have put together a nice piece. Look forward to your coming work! Nice Job.
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2000 10:38 pm |
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Brain Thanks man!
DeathByDuplicity Thanks, I'm glad you like it. The hair I did by using the same method I posted in the "Hair" thread awhile back. The stuff in the sandwich is supposed to be unidentifiable, although I'm kind of disappointed that it looks so much like a hand. I wanted it to look like some weird mystery substance. Oh well. And the stain looked much better before I started shading... Thanks!
Nex Thanks a lot!
Speve-o-matic Yep, if there was one part of the picture I was most appalled by, it's the background. I did a quick redo of the background, because my original background was too blurry. I really didn't put enough thought into this one. Crap. Oh well. You can still kind of see the original background in the 100x100 thumbnail I have on my site. Thanks for the compliment!
Frost Thanks, I was trying to get a whimsical, cartoony kind of look to it. I agree, the shadows should have been sharper. I totally forgot to add the shadow from his arm, though. As for the background, again, I didn't put nearly enough, time, effort, or planning into it, especially the shadows. Thanks for the tips, though!
Nori Hahahaha, I expected that.
Gambit Thanks a lot, man!
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4s member
Member # Joined: 24 Jan 2000 Posts: 89 Location: seattle
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2000 11:54 pm |
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that hair is AWsome! !!!!! |
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archii junior member
Member # Joined: 08 Jul 2000 Posts: 11 Location: all over the world
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2000 2:10 am |
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whoa that looks coo ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2000 5:37 pm |
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4s Thanks dude. That's my own patented Hair method there. I'm so cool.
Archii (Who are you???) Thanks a lot. I'm very pleased that some people like the pic. Heh, I don't. |
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Francis member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1155 Location: San Diego, CA
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2000 5:56 pm |
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I love this one. If you could somehow render the hands in the same manner you did for the face, I think it would be perfect. Shadows don't work, no perspective, etc. - doesn't matter. This image has too much creepy coolness to worry about all that. Depth of field effects work, too - adds to that menacingly corny look.
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Fred Flick Stone member
Member # Joined: 12 Apr 2000 Posts: 745 Location: San Diego, Ca, USA
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2000 6:16 pm |
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THe hands are too stiff. Not as well rendered as the rest of the image. Very creepy, kinda reminds me of the movie called Parents...seen it? This should have been in the movie... |
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