Sijun Forums :: View topic - Piece in progress, go ahead rip it to morsels!!! :-x

DeathbyDuplicity · member Member # Joined: 29 Jun 2000 Posts: 183

Well I'm not nearly through with this piece but I've been doing a lot of commenting and not posting art! I've only been working on this since last night, and I haven't added the actual tones and detail! SO this is just a basic guide layer to fine tune! He's going to be some cyborg type guy and I'm gonna add a lot to the backdrop, basicly all I've done was add the shape and one eyebrow! I'll get to the wiring and the human features later! This is only 10% finished btu that's why I posted it! To hear comments and suggestion ahead of time! So here you go, rip it to threads, and remember have fun! heheheh!

And just for the hell of it, here's a piece of shit I did will I was angry and shit! It took less than it takes most people to crap to do this! So step on it or whatever you want! heheh!

DeathbyDuplicity · member Member # Joined: 29 Jun 2000 Posts: 183

Shit while I'm at it, here's one I did for my band! Pea !!

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Freddio · Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2000 2:04 am

Cool Stuff death,

The top pic, looks good. Try to work on the skin tone, it has a plastic feel bout it. The shape is brilliant though

Once you've refined it and added a background it will look greaT

Freddio

DeathbyDuplicity · member Member # Joined: 29 Jun 2000 Posts: 183

Glad you liked it Freddio man, and yeah I'm figuring out the toning now! Err? Any Ideas for the background? I wanted to create a lab type scenario or such, but I dunno! I don't see much I can do with it exeot waht I intended! That's having him in a lab like I said, sitting in some heavy mech type chair as a guy is fixing the gapping hole that I'm adding to his chest! Anubody got suggestions, thoughts, a cigerette......a nickel.......a wooden nickel?

heheheheh!

BooMSticK · Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2000 3:43 am

Death!

the Matrix-collage is great. Nice overlapping of individual pieces.

The head seems pretty solid. The proportions looks ok. Too much dogde/burn for my taste! There are other tools, you know. The lightsourcing is what bugs me the most. It looks like you have around 15 different lightsources scattered around. Fix that and it will look great!

,Boomer

DeathbyDuplicity · member Member # Joined: 29 Jun 2000 Posts: 183

Glad you like the Matrix thing BooMSticK!

As far as the head guy, yeah I may have went a little over board with the dodge/burn tool! But I was going for a semi-artificial/semi-human look, since he's supposed to be both. I don't use the dodge tool as much as the picture may make you think, I do my brushing mostly like the picture of the Pea Album. For the lights I wanted two directly form the right side, one from the left, and a few little ones below and overhead....to simulate a lab lighting deal! Dunno I'll see how the pic comes, and change it if I hate it!

synj · Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2000 8:14 am

eheh i like the album title

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Gambit · Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2000 2:56 pm

Hey, I like the Matrix-collage you put together, it really covers the characters well. Nice work!

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DeathbyDuplicity · member Member # Joined: 29 Jun 2000 Posts: 183

heheheh! synj, I though it was pretty fucking funny too! We do a lot of Hard/Gothic/Evil type shit, I'm the fucking drummer! Yeah! Play alitte bass to, we probably won't get famous, but it's a hell of a fucking stress exhale! We're pretty popular in my surrounding towns though!

Gambit! About 10 minutes of fucking around and you guys are liking this shit! For gawd sake I did this while smoking a blunt! heheheh! I guess that means drugs are good aye?