[galaxal]

maybe you remember when I posted this last time, you guys helped me alot with useful comments. I remember loki (i think) said having a blue background can make her look better, well I did, but why?
and the shirt, I guess I am retard with art, I spent like ... 1 hour on it, and it still look suck. Some body said the legs are unable to define witch is overlaping witch, sorry, I really don't know what to do to make them clearly identified, please help!

plz tell me whatelse can be improved, thanx.

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[DeathbyDuplicity]

I'm not big on angels, but the wings look damn cool!

[CoDeX]

kewl wings , altho upper part looks weirdly bent and kinda flat ;O , but bottom part of wings is kewl pretty detailed

[TweeK]

Screw the shirt man Most guys smudge it away with their minds anyway.

To make the legs look seperate, just darken the area with a thin airbrush line. That's it.

Anyways, looks pretty good.
one thing left... the eyes are a bit dislocated... pull them a bit down

Greets
Jeff

[Bloodnite]

Only thing I dislike about the pic... is the face... the one thing I notice and like are the wings... very detailed, while the angel's face/hair are blury as shit... fix it! :P heh... anyways, blah?



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[galaxal]

tweak, youi are damn rigth, the eyes are a bit too high. but the leg part, hmmm, I am not trying to separate them, I am tryiung to make it easy to identify which is on which.
and codex, the chest used to be nake, but after all, I decided to just to put some cover on for her.

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[Jabberwocky]

You might want to make some shading so it looks like she has some clevage... It'll give her chest some demetion. You need to bring her arm more around to her right (our left), and you might want to try the arms behind the legs. Bring the leg more upwards... line them up more with her body... If you like the arms in front of the legs try bringing her legs down and twisting her body to the right (her left)...as I've told others you might want to use a live model to get the idea whatgoes where. On the shirt on her back you might want to add some... um... "fluffy" back there. And on the wings.... DAMN! They look really nice.


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[Kyri]

Looks cool Galaxal,
The wings are great. There are a few things that look odd to me tho. I cant make out why you have put the grey colour over where her eyes would be, and I think they would be lower down. Also her lips look very small. I think it might look better if you emphasise them some more. Looks cool tho.

[galaxal]

[Masaccio]

um hi
this aint technical stuff but when i look at the head hmm well,
i reckon u should work on the head and hair a bit.