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CapnPyro · Posted: Sat Jul 01, 2000 10:31 pm

this is a picture i drew a while back and decided to color. its the first thing ive colored with this tablet and i dont think it looks that great, but i figured a few of you might enjoy it. critiques are welcome

If you get a broken pict. icon its because gte sucks, heres the link, reload it a couple times till it appears http://home1.gte.net/capnpyro/dangergirl_color.jpg

-Cappy-

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DeathbyDuplicity · member Member # Joined: 29 Jun 2000 Posts: 183

I'm not really Danger Girl's biggest fan, but hey it's good to see another comic fan! Anyway in my opinion the layout you was going for looks pretty good! The pencils look too light though, darken em' a bit with levels or ink em'! If I were you I'd use a bit more defined cuts and a little anatomy study! Overall it's cool!

Note: Don't listen to me, there's a ton of others like 50 times better on these boards!

Here's one of mine when I was trying the comic thing (did't draw it), but fuck that! I want the digital man! That's my dream!

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CapnPyro · Posted: Sat Jul 01, 2000 11:38 pm

yah that was drawn by travis charest, i actually stared at that panel when i first got that comic and though of how cool that would look to have the light coming out through that window, did a good job, blood looks nice. i think thats supposed to be water down at the very bottom

Slicer · Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2000 7:53 am

Is that drool on her breasts or is it I that have drooled on the screen...hmm..maybe not drool..uuh...ooops =)

AKIRA_x · Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2000 9:01 am

Two things about the image. Her eyes...mmh...I know shes like DEAD HOT, and really dont care what us mortal gus think, but right now it looks like shes a bit retarted...that cool look with the eyes up isnt working here. Actually..it could look like she is just about to die from the lack of air. So make the eyes a tad bitt smaler..move them down a bit (needs more forehead)..and make the eyes more centerd in the eyesocket. Nummber to..the direction of the gun..right now it looks like she dosent know a gun from a...a....a..mmh..well..erh..my dirty mind at work here....anyhow..twist it more straight forward. Other then that..great image...great work!!

Thomas

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Kyri · Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2000 2:21 pm

I like this one a lot, nice composition,
and very good anatomically...but are them gals on drugs......thats bad man, heh, heh. ;P

Muzman · Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2000 2:47 pm

sorry to derail, but...

Deathbyduplicity, that colour job looks nice. But what's going on with her shadow? It looks alarmingly like (*shudder*) "drop shadow".

DeathbyDuplicity · member Member # Joined: 29 Jun 2000 Posts: 183

Muzman! What a insult! heheheh! Nah I didn't trix off no effects! I was just sloppy as hell and mad, so I did a load selection fill, g blur, shaped it, lalala! I wish I'd done more, but no back trackin'! heh!

Hey CapnPyro! Who's the femme in the imprint?

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CapnPyro · Posted: Tue Jul 04, 2000 12:51 am

That is none other, then the most beautiful girl in the world, Kim Smith. I do mean girl, shes 16

www.kimsmithmodel.com

and thanks for the comments, hehe i think ill move the eyes down a wee bit, though i think the crack whore look is rather fetching

-CapnPyro-

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Nex · Posted: Tue Jul 04, 2000 1:25 am

she looks like she would sing in S-Club 7 .. yuck

CapnPyro · Posted: Tue Jul 04, 2000 1:37 am

whats S-Club 7?

Dean Welsh · Posted: Tue Jul 04, 2000 3:11 am

There ain't no party like an S-Club party.

Spitfire · Posted: Tue Jul 04, 2000 3:14 am

If that girl is 16, she's been munching more hormones than the entire russian athletic team... She looks like fucking 25 man.

Nex · Posted: Tue Jul 04, 2000 4:08 am

The formula for S-Club seven goes as follows:

You need following ingredients:

* 1 oz. Hanson
* 3 spoons Britney-Aguilera powder
* 0,3 l pimple cream
* a few drips of aaron carter essence
* 2 oz. of ABBA, well dried

Mix the 1 oz. Hanson with the Britney-Aguilera powder and stir for about 10 Minutes. Add pimple cream and heat up till boiling. cut the 2 oz. of ABBA and add while slowly stirring.. You can put in a few drips of aaron carter essence to adjust the annoyingness.
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No really.. annoying teenie pimple pop thats what it is.

mantis · Posted: Tue Jul 04, 2000 5:22 am

Does anyone have any links for good tutorials/how-tos for comic book colouring. I have always wondered how to do that. I can never figure it out. Please help me!

n8 · Posted: Tue Jul 04, 2000 6:08 am

i dont care wot the hell u ppls think....shes shweeet as!!....
harrrr =P~~~