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benbaur
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Nex
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| Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2000 8:49 am |
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I like the first one because of the very unconventional pose.. good idea- even though she has HUGE breast(not "s" because I can only see one and don't know what happened to the other)
In the second pic you really showed that you are a lazy bastard 
The head is really cool and drawn out and the rest is just scribbled there. Just spend as much time on the body and the dress as on the head and it will be great.
Cya
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Blood Shreth
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| Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2000 8:52 am |
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Hehe i like the first one too 
uhhm on the second the lips and al the things on the edge look strange... like cut off  |
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el tigre
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| Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2000 4:13 pm |
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how on earth did you manage to get that woman in that position in the first pic. Either she has breasts on her back or a chuff on her arse. Maybe its just me.....It actually looks kinda natural on first glance then.....I dunno.
Am I talking shit?
I like it a lot all the same, and yeah, I agree that you should have put more time into the shoulders/chest of the second one. Colour it it'll look coool :�
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