[Masaccio]

i reckon its my funniest in a while
its meant to be a cartoon dj

[Tinusch]

Umm... Isn't that the dude from your God pic?

[4s]

it looookkkss gooood bbbuuuut lloooooks kinda "dirty" as in colors.
aaand line weight could use some improvement. uh, like varying line thicknesses. just take a look at Spiritwolf's "dragon" hERE

and the LONG topic title was NOT cool btw.
hope the link wored.

[This message has been edited by 4s (edited June 11, 2000).]
dang it! just trying to get that link to work!
[This message has been edited by 4s (edited June 11, 2000).]
Again....

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[lotor]

You need to draw this character from several different angles so we can get an idea of what the guy will look like from everywhere.

For example right now I can't tell what that is on the bottom of his face. Is it a mouth or a chin or what?

And yes the line weight does need to be adjusted.
bye

[kurisu]

Hi Masaccio,
I dig him He's all psychadelic 'n stuff... but the tie? Forgive my ignorance - but what DJ wears a tie?! Word up G - waaaassssaaaaaaaabbbi?!

I like his Ren mouth - sort of deflated balloon look - made me laugh *ha ha*

You might try adjusting the color layers on him (ie - make them screen instead of normal, I think)... but then again, the fact that the colors are dirty (means he smells) and balances out some of that funky shaft color action goin' on in the rest of it!

I actually think the simple, fat black lines help make this image stronger (though you could certainly play with them). If you're not into that, you could do another pic, and try to vary the widths... and then go back and look at this one, and see which you like more...

4s - you gotta erase all that 'edited by' BS, know what I'm sayin'? (pain in the bum, I know, but you know...)

-k (irk out)

[4s]

no, you see all the 'edited by' BS needs to be there so you know all the PAIn i went through to get that link to work ! ahahhaha! (evil demented laugh)