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samdragon
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Joined: 05 May 2000
Posts: 487
Location: Indianapolis

PostPosted: Sat Jun 10, 2000 12:58 pm     Reply with quote
is it finished? It looks like it was cut off at the bottom, if it is finished...
you have these nice rounded edges at the top and sides, but at the bottom, everything is cut off as if it was sliced by a razor. That hard edges is causing too much contrast with your organic looking design.
Be careful with your text, it's starting to become to hard to read. If the text is important is should be easily read.
Keep at it, and remember about those hard edges fighting with the rounded soft edges.
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NocTurN
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Joined: 06 Jun 2000
Posts: 16
Location: Minden, Germany

PostPosted: Sat Jun 10, 2000 2:13 pm     Reply with quote
Erm...I think it's for your Homepage? Let me tell you some things.
1. It's too big (not everybody got a 19" or higher, u know )
2. it takes a long time to load for people with lower connection rates.
3. The Part with the Logo (the Zoom Creations thing) is too big
4. To get a very nice - Kick-Ass-Interface be carefull in painting, add many details and do it with love (spend as much love as you will spend your Girlfriend to your Paintings )
5. Keep all small, especially the borders.
6. Don't hate me for this comments, I only want to help you to get a nice interface

-NocTurN
============================ http://www.asomnia.de
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Draggyboy
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Location: Mississauga, Ontario, CANADA

PostPosted: Sat Jun 10, 2000 8:07 pm     Reply with quote
thanx guys. for the comments.
wanna give me a hug dudes?
:P

NocTurn.. your comments are noted! extremely useful! and u2 samdragon!
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Draggyboy
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Location: Mississauga, Ontario, CANADA

PostPosted: Sat Jun 10, 2000 11:11 pm     Reply with quote
this piece took me overnight, and spend over 9hrs+ to do.
ack.
my stomach hurts and i really needs some slezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzing.
>

here's the pic
http://www.zoomcreations.com/layout2.jpg


[This message has been edited by Draggyboy (edited June 10, 2000).]
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