[The Dude]

Inspired by Micke and others attempting
this style...tear it to shreads!

in progress...I'm trying to work out the
details...this is difficult!

[The Dude]

...sniffle...

[Joachim]

Don't be so down The Dude,

There's so many posts these days that it's almost hard to get attention

Looks good. I think you've managed to mix between black and white nicely, if that make sense ?
I think the sketch itself is a bit vague. If it's suppose to be a bit abstract it doesn't matter, but if I were you, I would try to make some clearer details on that cape and suit, and also, it would be nice to expand the canvas and try to work out some legs and ground and maybe even a background.

But all in all, a good start.



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[Thorn]

I think something really interesting and good is happening with this picture. I like the direction your taking. Maybe you could add another figure, positioned so that they're staring into each other visors. A standoff or something like that.

[This message has been edited by Thorn (edited June 01, 2000).]

[The Dude]

Okay, here is an update. Thanks for the
advice fellas and yes, Joachim, it is
supposed to be kind of abstract. Not
that I could draw realism if I tried...

I think the perspective may be a little
skewed or something, but this is where
I'm at right now.

Ultimately I'd like to add some kind
of lonely bonzai tree on a hill in the
background...we'll see.

Thanks for the feedback

I should probably put the image in here, heh heh



[This message has been edited by The Dude (edited June 01, 2000).]

[Sedone]

TheDude, no offense but what is that?

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[The Dude]

Ouch!

You tell me what you think it is.