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Garble · junior member Member # Joined: 30 May 2000 Posts: 4

Hello,
This is a 14 meg mpg i just finished with my friend, Z|G.
it is our first animation and it had a 5 week time constraint, so bear with us.
www.nstd.net/usr/rvance/zig-and-garble/whack.mpg

thanks,
garble

Guy · Posted: Tue May 30, 2000 8:18 pm

hey thats pretty damn good. the modelings great.. theres some parts of the animation that needs work, but its still really good for your first animation. good work guys

JaffaCAke · Posted: Wed May 31, 2000 5:48 am

/wishes for a cable modem

i'll look at it later ok?

synj · Posted: Wed May 31, 2000 6:35 am

yeah, no fair! hehehe I hate text intros with a passion. I downloaded about 5 or 6 seconds of it, discovering that much was text alone - then i just threw it out. that in itself could quite possibly be a critique for internet material.

-synj www.synj.net

Jesus4Life · Posted: Wed May 31, 2000 7:59 am

too much text, I quit the download

[This message has been edited by Jesus4Life (edited May 31, 2000).]

LeChuck · Posted: Wed May 31, 2000 8:18 am

Come on! Too much time is wasted downloading nothing but black and some text.

Incarnatation · Posted: Wed May 31, 2000 8:56 am

i have to admit it does piss me off when i download a little movie file from a website and realise half of it is simply the name of the website at the start. I know it aint the same in this case but if your making a movie for the web youve got to take peoples attention spans into account.

I did download it though and what i saw i liked its very nice, not quite sure what its about though

Garble · junior member Member # Joined: 30 May 2000 Posts: 4

sorry

-garble

laminator · Posted: Wed May 31, 2000 9:28 pm

Hi there!

The modelling is pretty good. I especially like the pod racer and the dragon (maybe show more of the dragon, cause it's kinda in the dark). The texture maping is pretty good. I'd say for you're first animation it's awesome. I'd say you'd need to work on your timing, and push the key poses a little more. Also the cuts at the begining need a little work.... try one smooth camera pan from each vehicle and then up into the window.

Great job... can't wait to see the next one....

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LaMInatoR

Garble · junior member Member # Joined: 30 May 2000 Posts: 4

Thanks guys.
Yeah, it looks better on vhs, you can see the dragon alot better
We did all the animating in 4 or 5 days, so we had litle time to get into it and push our abilities.
Thanks for the criticism.

-garble