View previous topic :: View next topic |
Author |
Topic : "A new Digital Artist is born" |
LeMage junior member
Member # Joined: 29 May 2000 Posts: 1 Location: France
|
Posted: Mon May 29, 2000 4:56 pm |
|
![](templates/drizz/images/hrline.gif) |
Hi guys and girls
I'm a french student in 3D art, and a new digital artist.
I need your criticize of my work so let's go to my website :
http://genartist.free.fr
and reply me.
This is my first digital painting
[This message has been edited by LeMage (edited May 29, 2000).] |
|
Back to top |
|
Nex member
Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2000 Posts: 2086 Location: Austria
|
Posted: Tue May 30, 2000 1:15 am |
|
![](templates/drizz/images/hrline.gif) |
hi, and welcome!
Nice site btw.. but not everyone speaks french -> I could not read the stuff there.
The mage here has some anatomy problems it seems.. (as far as I can say the upper body is way too long)
Then the lighting is a bit confusing.. the lightning ball on the staff should cast light on the lower side of the left arm for instance(the raised one) and not on the upper side in my opinion.
Last I think the ambient light is a bit too bright for this scene. (clouds and all, he stands on a big moutain where there is not so much reflective surface for diffuse bouncelight)
Keep it up however, its not bad
Cya
------------------
- Nex
http://on.to/nex |
|
Back to top |
|
Slicer member
Member # Joined: 03 Mar 2000 Posts: 187 Location: Sala, Sweden
|
Posted: Tue May 30, 2000 4:17 am |
|
![](templates/drizz/images/hrline.gif) |
Very cool pic even thou I have to agree with nex that the upper body is a bit to long and should be more like his shoulders. and the bit rightnext to his hands seem to weird, m aybe should shorten down the arm a bit?
And either it�s one of the hottest places, because it looks like the mountain is as high as the clouds and I think there should be snow on the top.
maybe a polar-bear? =) |
|
Back to top |
|
|