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Gordillo
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Location: Guildford,UK

PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2000 2:22 am     Reply with quote
Two nights of insomnium,a lot of coffe and donuts make it possible.Your opinions and sugestions are welcome.





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Joined: 04 Jan 2000
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Location: Klaipeda Lithuania

PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2000 2:53 am     Reply with quote
Ohhhhh... Ah....
What... What is the receipt??!?!?! How many nuts???
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Eudoxus
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Joined: 19 Apr 2000
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PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2000 2:57 am     Reply with quote
That's really purdy...

yeh! Nice, Love the chick
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Nex
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Joined: 25 Mar 2000
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PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2000 3:14 am     Reply with quote
Very cool, I like the composition especially.

Critique: The background is *phew* great!

The fire on the ship looks a bit artifical (not "real")

The girl's face (jawbone shading too sharp) and hair would need some work to fit the rest of the picture's quality.

Anyway great work!
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Ko
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Location: Aarhus, Denmark

PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2000 3:35 am     Reply with quote
Holy Mole!

That's a friggin' good piece...
Very good composition, great sense of scale and depth, and I love the sunlight.

....I agree with Nex, work a bit more on the hair!

What is the original resolution, and could you post a link?

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Chapel
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PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2000 4:02 am     Reply with quote
Nice work. Great lighting. Only bad thing I can see about it is that it reminds me of the movie "Battlefield Earth". And that movie blows.
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Frost
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Joined: 12 Jan 2000
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Location: Montr�al, Canada

PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2000 5:12 am     Reply with quote
Gordillo: Very nice one!! The thing that bothers me most are the still visible black outlines on the ship, the bright red fire, and I think there might be something wrong with the perspective on the ship -- perspective perhaps too 'steep'. But I really like the image, love the sky and environmental mood.
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Binke
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PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2000 6:02 am     Reply with quote
Say Gordillo, do you like orange?

fav. part of the pic would probably be the right side, with the mountains and the slightly blue sky. But I agree with Frost on the perspective of the ship. Also I think the girl has a weee bit to much red light on her.

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PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2000 5:15 pm     Reply with quote
Dude if this was "Battlefield Earth" the picture would be tilted at some ungodly angle.
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Cos
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Joined: 05 Mar 2000
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PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2000 5:53 pm     Reply with quote
another xcellent gordillo pic! :O sheet, that is really cool man. I do agree with Frost about the black outlines on the ship tho, does kinda takes away from the 3dness of it

[This message has been edited by Cos (edited May 25, 2000).]
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CapnPyro
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PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2000 6:52 pm     Reply with quote
lmao @ dysanti

so true, ha!
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g:tech
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Location: Beaverton, OR

PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2000 1:17 am     Reply with quote
Damn, Gordillo... that's awesome.

I won't bother repeating the suggestions above, as they're the only ones I see. I love the picture as is, though!

Man, I gotta learn how to do clouds and backgrounds, landscapes, etc...

Can that stuff (the background) be done in Photoshop, or do you need Painter's brush power to do stuff like that?

If anyone knows where I can find links to creating good backgrounds in Photoshop (I don't have Painter) please let me know!!!

Oh great. Now look what you've done Gordillo.. you've inspired me!! THANKS A LOT!



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PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2000 3:39 am     Reply with quote
WOW!!!!..

critics:

-that dude looks like it's made out of wood..
(hair&face)

-fire unnatural and smoke looks quite fat in my eyes...

but I LIKE IT!!...
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