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proximo · member Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2000 Posts: 467

Hey all , this is a pic of some girl that i was talken to sometime ago, and somehow i ended up drawing her .. ohh well

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[This message has been edited by proximo (edited May 23, 2000).]

Hurri-cane · Posted: Tue May 23, 2000 9:43 am

great pic...but here some critic...

the most error people do is to be too scared to use some more strenght in the pencil...it would look better if there was some darker segments on the pic...mostly her face and pillow...to create the feeling of depth..(excuse my bad english, im learning though)

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Affected · Posted: Tue May 23, 2000 9:46 am

And in any case, smudging often produces an uunclean result. (Granted, it can have it's uses, but it's good to learn to shade without)

proximo · member Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2000 Posts: 467

i do use smuging but as far as the darkness it is darker . the scan came up light for some reason , this is not the full pic, it was too big to scan the rest of it in , and unfortunatly, i gave her the pic.. really wish i hadnt ehehe , but thanks for the feed back ..

Snakebyte · Posted: Tue May 23, 2000 12:02 pm

Her name wouldn�t be Ashley would it?

The pic and pose looks VARY familiar. My Brother dated a girl who looked vary close to your pic.

Here is the link to her Bio and a pic of her in the same basic pose http://accucomm.net/~ashe/bio.html

(Personally I thought the girl was ugly as hell, Ashley that is)

random · Posted: Tue May 23, 2000 12:10 pm

I can't see much same in those pics..

Snakebyte · Posted: Tue May 23, 2000 1:46 pm

Yea, just thought I'd ask anyway....

Drorak · member Member # Joined: 20 Apr 2000 Posts: 169

ahh... Pillow talk.

shardik · Posted: Wed May 24, 2000 8:33 pm

wait... is her name jana?

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Nex · Posted: Thu May 25, 2000 2:37 am

hmm you didnt ask for feedback.. but i will crtitique it anyway

the lips have an odd shape, they are not symmetric. There is a bulge over her nose on the left side of her head at eyebrow level.

proximo · member Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2000 Posts: 467

well her name was Melisa i think, only went out with her once stoped talking to her after that

but i know its not all right and stuff , but the thing is the pillow was pulling her lips and things in diff dirs like that so ohh well thanks for the comments anyhow .. late