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Gordillo
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PostPosted: Fri May 19, 2000 8:15 am     Reply with quote
Hi all!This is a water test,the other elements of the image (crashed airship,etc...) are simply incidental(he,he..).Our opinions are welcome.



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micke
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PostPosted: Fri May 19, 2000 9:41 am     Reply with quote
Wow!That's really neat !!!!
I like the colours on this one, and the water
is really good captured. Keep it up!

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PostPosted: Fri May 19, 2000 12:00 pm     Reply with quote
Mmmmmmmm . . .very nice - cant'offer any imput for improvement because it doen't really need any.

Ned

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PostPosted: Fri May 19, 2000 11:39 pm     Reply with quote
This is one of the great images on this forum. Every so oftin there are some posts that just stand out from the rest. And this picture to me is so... perfect, in my opinion. And the color's are just so well choosen.
Just wanted to commend you on the great job you did on this image.

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ole
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PostPosted: Fri May 19, 2000 11:47 pm     Reply with quote
I find this image great in all ways. Maybe you could remove the circle in the lower left corner (lensflare?). The colouring is good and the water and the people look realistic.
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Muzman
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PostPosted: Fri May 19, 2000 11:53 pm     Reply with quote
awww. I thought this was going to be about witches...
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Lange_Pisang
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2000 8:32 am     Reply with quote
Hmmm...

I find it strange why this topic hasn't got many replies yet...

Aah well, I shall post a reply here (<100 posts and counting!)

Ok, my opinion: "This image is VERY, VERY neat"! "Geez man"! "Great concept too"! "Lovely"!

-I don't have any critique sorry...
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Nex
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2000 8:53 am     Reply with quote
I'm sorry Gordillo, but FBI just called and told me that you will have to take that image down. Its too cool, better than the FBI allowed you to be.

just jealous

But I can critique something at least *harr harr*:

the cord that the spacefarers hang on are almost too straight for the incredible waves below... the wind should move them I think.

Otherwise I would suggest to bring spooge or dhab here to critique because this is far beyond my level
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2000 9:55 am     Reply with quote
Uhm.. damn. Thats uh.. pretty good I'd have to say.. yup. Pretty good.

Very nice work Gordillo. I love the atmosphere.. it almost looks Jovian. Tho, I have to agree with Nex, those guys would be kinda flying around what with the wind and the waves. Not that I could do better

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A.Buttle
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2000 12:28 pm     Reply with quote
Oh. Oh. You're hurting me. Get rid of the lens flare.

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- Dasyati -
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2000 5:36 pm     Reply with quote
I don't see any lens flare...which is actually a pretty refreshing discovery considering the sunlight in this pic.

I see planets in the back...I see a little glare coming off the edges of the ship...I see what might be a large sunburst gradient...I see no lens flare.

This pic rules I love it!
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Cos
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2000 5:45 pm     Reply with quote
wow, really cool image Gordillo. Something reminds me of luis Royo, the water maybe... Sheet the the water is fkkin great man! looks like u passed
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freddy flicks stones
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2000 6:05 pm     Reply with quote
Absolutely beautiful. I would have to agree, get rid of the flare thing at the bottom. The water behind it is just too cool to be covered with that thing...

Bring em on...
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Kyri
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2000 7:37 pm     Reply with quote
Lovely image Gordillo,
The way you have captured the waves, is awesome. Love the clour and lighting.
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cecil
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2000 8:09 pm     Reply with quote
That's amazing!! It would make a good cover for a fantasy/science fiction novel.
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AliasMoze
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2000 9:01 pm     Reply with quote
Lens flare, be gone! Otherwise, very nice image. Tells a story. Well executed, etc.

The waves seem a little turbulent. How far out to sea is the ship?

Anyway, good going!
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Gordillo
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PostPosted: Mon May 22, 2000 4:24 am     Reply with quote
Thanks for your suggestions!!.The ship is near the coast.I will take off
the flare (looks like a floated mellon).

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PostPosted: Mon May 22, 2000 7:01 pm     Reply with quote
Oh NOW I see it...jeez took me long enough, it's so subtle

Hey with all these waves and sun and sea spray and stuff, you know what this pic needs? A RAINBOW!
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