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cecil member
Member # Joined: 16 Nov 1999 Posts: 151
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Posted: Sat May 20, 2000 8:24 pm |
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I'm doing a comic in my Visual Design class at school called "Agents of Life". Here are a few of the characters to star in it. Agent Jem Shine is only one of three Agents of Life.
Also, a friend told me that Doctor Dementia looks and sounds familiar to them. I am starting to wonder if I subconsciously copied an already copyrighted character. The clear brain case is quite clich�d, but I wanted to make a stereotypical villain. The only comparison I can make is of the pink brain thing in Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles and the monkey villain from Powerpuff Girls.
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Sat May 20, 2000 8:40 pm |
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Nice. I like the style. The proportions on the first two characters could use some work, but Dr. Dementia and his Assistant are awesome. I don't think Dr. Dementia is already a character, although there used to be some obnoxious guy named Dr. Demento who has his own radio show and some TV specials and whatnot. Maybe they were thinking of him. |
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Lange_Pisang member
Member # Joined: 26 Apr 2000 Posts: 264 Location: Epe, The Netherlands
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Posted: Sun May 21, 2000 3:28 am |
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Hmmm...
I find the characters a little bit too stiff...
Try to draw them more "relaxed"... |
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tanis member
Member # Joined: 26 Oct 1999 Posts: 207 Location: Bergamo, Italy
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Posted: Sun May 21, 2000 4:11 am |
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The assistant is cute! |
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Moose member
Member # Joined: 15 May 2000 Posts: 171 Location: Bowling Green, OH, USA
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Posted: Sun May 21, 2000 9:17 am |
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i cant place the doctor...but the assistant looks a lot like the spy vs spy characters from MAD magazine. Its ok though if any one gives you crap, they are your "artistic interpretations."
nice ideas..i would work on proportions like Lange_Pisang mentioned.
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