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cecil
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2000 8:24 pm     Reply with quote
I'm doing a comic in my Visual Design class at school called "Agents of Life". Here are a few of the characters to star in it. Agent Jem Shine is only one of three Agents of Life.



Also, a friend told me that Doctor Dementia looks and sounds familiar to them. I am starting to wonder if I subconsciously copied an already copyrighted character. The clear brain case is quite clich�d, but I wanted to make a stereotypical villain. The only comparison I can make is of the pink brain thing in Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles and the monkey villain from Powerpuff Girls.

Thanks.
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2000 8:40 pm     Reply with quote
Nice. I like the style. The proportions on the first two characters could use some work, but Dr. Dementia and his Assistant are awesome. I don't think Dr. Dementia is already a character, although there used to be some obnoxious guy named Dr. Demento who has his own radio show and some TV specials and whatnot. Maybe they were thinking of him.
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PostPosted: Sun May 21, 2000 3:28 am     Reply with quote
Hmmm...

I find the characters a little bit too stiff...
Try to draw them more "relaxed"...
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PostPosted: Sun May 21, 2000 4:11 am     Reply with quote
The assistant is cute!
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PostPosted: Sun May 21, 2000 9:17 am     Reply with quote
i cant place the doctor...but the assistant looks a lot like the spy vs spy characters from MAD magazine. Its ok though if any one gives you crap, they are your "artistic interpretations."

nice ideas..i would work on proportions like Lange_Pisang mentioned.

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