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StormVermin
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 Posted: Fri May 19, 2000 5:59 am |
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Here it is...
Crit?
Thanks for all your suggestions, comments and bluntness.
-Adam Bromell |
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Lange_Pisang
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| Posted: Fri May 19, 2000 6:11 am |
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AWWW!! RED CROSSES!! (hmmm...how many times have I ever say that...)
Anyway, I know the copy/paste thingy...)
Stormvermin,
I'm a litle bit dissapointed, I think it needs much more things (called details). When I saw you're preview I thought it would be one hell of picture, but in my opinion it isn't now... It needs much more details...Defenitely...
But that's just my opinion...
Storm, don't be "down" because of this reply, just try harder the next time ok?
Artists make bad and good art, but the bad art makes their good art good...
Think about it...
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awwwwww...still have to learn a lot,
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n8
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| Posted: Fri May 19, 2000 6:54 am |
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| hey...that looks like one of the first pics i done on the comp...well..the style anyways =)....btw....i recon u could do plenty more to it |
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micke
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| Posted: Fri May 19, 2000 9:28 am |
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I agree with Lange. I think the first Bounty hunter that you posted had a lot of potential. The pose is really cool and menacing  , but i think the background you added don't match,
Maybe the best way is to study pictures of
buildings. Also i think the way you shaded it makes it look unfinished in some way.
Try using a different methods to shade on different surfaces in order to describe texture. I did one quick, but it's in black
and white:
It's very rough and many of the details does'nt make much sence, but a point is that if you work rough in the early stage, it can aloud you to see more posibilities in the beginning. I also added a bit in the corner,
so that the whole gun shows(i really liked the shapes on your's.)
-Micke
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StormVermin
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| Posted: Fri May 19, 2000 10:28 am |
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Alright, well... I will attempt to change the background. That's one of my weaker points in art... BACK GROUND.
Anyway, I will give it a go. So as it stand, "Bounty Hunter - Incomplete"
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Cos
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| Posted: Fri May 19, 2000 10:47 am |
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| Storm the pic is not showing up for me ;/ What is the addylink for it? |
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