[Moose]

This started out as a sketch in painter...that ended up being finalized in my sketchy style. I could have spent more time on it, i may redo it as an oil painting in painter..but i dont know. heres the img



feel free to let me know what you think!

[Nex]

Looks quite nice.. although its very early to do so I will spoil your day by giving you some feedback

1) The right shoulder seems dislodged (maybe during heavy combat )

2) He has a very strange muscle between biceps and lower arm

3) I think the ear is a bit too far back

4) the right upper leg seems too small to me

.. so, now kick me please

[Moose]

haha. no prob man. i can take what ever you dish out. RIP ME TO PIECES it is ok. what ever yall say here will just make later peices better. i know there are some inconsitancies.....this was done in about 30 minutes. I also dont know how i put that wierd looking muscle in there, man. i didnt even notice that. thanks for pointing that out

so, please, let the festivites continue

[This message has been edited by Moose (edited May 17, 2000).]

[Cos]

Moose that's a great sketch, very cool style. I like the head and look on the face.
To critique I'd say

His arm kinda looks like he has two biceps,
the second lower lump should'nt be there, that should be the start of the forearm, which means lose/reshape the lower half of the forearm too.

The space from the knee to the ankle looks too short and the foot twists in too much, I think it's the heel that's doing it, sticks out too much and the way it grooves in to the little toe looks off.

The ear is too far left/high and should turn more clockwise.

I think this is right, hope it helps.

[Cos]

Also if that is his nipples I can see then his chects looks a bit low too.