[Lange_Pisang]

I just want to show my pic here, it's not digital art (I don't know how Photoshop works...YET!) and it's maybe nothing compared to that art you pro's are posting here...

Anyway, I want some critics, it would be appreciated...

Ps: does anyone knows were you can get good tutorials for that Photoshop Art y'all post here...

[Hurri-cane]

the guy whit the axe, his left arm is kinda small...you tried to make perspective on his arm (my english SUX) its hard...its a good pic...


nice job...

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[Frost]

Hurricane: I think that's suppose to be a girl, hence the bigger pectorals.

Lange: Well, there are a few problems with it, but it's a nice start! The hips seem a bit low, and there seems to be a lack of butt cheeks where women naturally have more fat there (I heard women store 30% of their body fat in the rear and thigh area). There an even bigger problem with the axe arm... the angle of the upper arm seems to place the shoulder too low, fixing the angle of the elbow should give better results. The other upper arm seems quite thick -- from that angle I think it would look better if the upper arm was rotated 90 degrees towards the inside, the elbow pointing outwards, which would give it a more natural 'pulling' movement -- the upper arm is not round, but wider from front to back and thinner from outside to inside. The fat guy pulling the girl seems shoulder and elbow-less. You chose rather difficult positions to draw characters, with a lot of perspective present in their axis... tough tough tough. =)

frost.

[Nex]

I'm currently trying to decypher the text on the other side of this scanned drawing

Is it some chemical or medical text?
Seems to be a science topic to me.

[This message has been edited by Nex (edited May 03, 2000).]

[Lange_Pisang]

Thanks Guys,

it'll help me a lot for the next time...

Ooh, and Nex, the text on the other side is a text (in Dutch) how to do your suicide very smooth and painless and how to write good "goodbye" letters for your relatives...

But uhm, does nobody knows were you can get good Photoshop Tutorials...I want to start a new hobby...(that'll rock, like stale bread)

-Maybe I should search by myself on altavista or sumfin...

[bop]

heej lange banaan ! goed werk anatomie klopt nog niet helemaal maar het ziet er al goed uit... als je meer wilt leren van anatomie dan moet je hier ff kijken daar staan goeie models:
http://dar.3dpalette.com

kijk onder tutorials>anatomy

succes

een mede Nederlander

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