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Suhan Wijaya
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 Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2000 6:54 am |
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Finally, dunn finish dis guy.
This is my very first work.
pls subject me to ur critiques...
(i know...he got no genitals.. just take it as if he's wearin a skin tight suit)
btw...this is supposed to be printed on my class's camp tshirt....so tell me wat words u think is the most suitable to go along with dis guy...
u kno like "strength....sophistication...."
sumthin like dat....
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Zor
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| Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2000 8:13 am |
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The picture is not bad, but too much Highlights. ther too bright and dont blend in with the shadows enough
The words that I think he is saying is.. "OH MY GOD, they killed captin Winky"
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SaltyDog
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| Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2000 3:21 pm |
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| Huh? My chest muscles look like that..I have to wear a "bro" to keep them up. hehehehe |
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Freddio
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| Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2000 4:05 pm |
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Good job Suhan Wijaya. I think you did the top half really well but the legs seem to let this pic down, yea and mabny ease off the dodge tool a little  , so if you fix those things up you've got a good bit of art here.
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Suhan Wijaya
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| Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2000 6:30 pm |
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| Thanks ppl.. |
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AcidDrone
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| Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2000 8:06 pm |
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faust.. you say one thing, then contradict it ?
what was the point in the comment in that case?
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Suhan Wijaya
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| Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2000 8:36 pm |
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juz dunn some special effects to spice up the whole image...
comments pls
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faustgfx
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| Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2000 11:07 pm |
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aciddrone- maybe to give him a hint how/what to do? oh wait, that'd be logical and the right answer, i can't answer with that.
i'm just avoiding the "teach me more/show me/blabla" phase. not to mention i also said something that'd help the guy. or is that forbidden as well?
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Ned
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| Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2000 11:38 pm |
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Rather than go for the "skintight gimp suit or no knob?" affect, what about putting him in some tight swimming trunks/cycling shorts, that way you won't lose the muscle definition that your working on. Also the eyes need some work instead of just being flat colour.
Nice job though all the same!
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faustgfx
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| Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2000 11:54 pm |
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use your sense of logic. you just *don't* use the dodge tool to do highlights like that on color. fuck happens and it'll come out like that. it looks bad. learn to use the airbrush as the primary tool and the burn/dodge tool as an aid.
(or maybe don't. i don't.)
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Mr Weasel
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| Posted: Mon May 01, 2000 12:31 am |
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| the hilites don't work i think. it's kinda odd if you know what i mean. don't use dodge too much. |
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Mr Weasel
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| Posted: Mon May 01, 2000 12:36 am |
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