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WARiii · Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2000 8:51 pm

this is a quick thing i drew cause i was bored its unfinished but i stiill want ur opinions =)

Guy · Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2000 9:11 pm

nice shading so far

but there seems to be something wrong with his left eye. the eye it self seems to be looking towards the nose. cant see his puple. i dont know if you were going to change that when you coloured it or not, just thought id point that out

aquamire · Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2000 9:37 pm

Its a good start, but the face seems a little bit ill-proporshioned. humans usualy have bysemmetrical body parts.. or close to, and well, that guy doesnt, heh. Not a bad start tho. Better than my older stuff in PS. Tho, I gotta say, that pic kinda reminds me of Aphex Twin.

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jasonN · Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2000 11:33 pm

I think it looks okay if it's a bit out of proportion. It looks like a comic-style pic, and proportions are always off in cartoons.

Anyway, keep it up, it should turn out fine

Oh and happy birthday Nova!

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nova · Posted: Wed Apr 26, 2000 9:46 am

thanks WARiii.. for the card too

nice image overall; it has a nice assymetrical look to it which makes it seem.. er.. more liquid and natural than trying to rely on math (proportions and x-many-spaces-between-x-feature). This image has a LOT of potential. Some thigs I could say, though is blur the the teensy part of line on the (my)left eye there, as well as the right a little, as well as doing something with the ear. It seems a little distracting like it is presently (i tend to either make the ears that I draw pointed to contribute to the image or totally invisible so it's not distracting.)

that is all.

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