[zapman]

Hey need a little Feedback on whats good and whats bad.


The people on the right side are what i am working on at the time..


Thanks!

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art, fart, and be smart.

[This message has been edited by zapman (edited April 23, 2000).]

[Drorak]

I like it a lot, but I find that parts of the desert looks a little as if they're stuck right behind the cliff, rather than far away. Maybe if you darkened the desert and blurred the sticks, they would appear further away.

[Mr Weasel]

Hi Zapman, remember me ? Maybe you're bored with all my rather harsh feedbacks, aren't ya ? Well sometimes feedbacks hurts but it won't kill. Right ?
Anyway, what's the man on the left holding in his hand, is it a rifle ? If it is, you should make the barrel/nozzle a little thinner and longer cause it looks more like a grenade launcher.
Is the man suppose to carry a kid on his shoulder ? Maybe you should make it closer to his head.
The sand dunes are quite odd, it looks like rippling water.
That's it Zap. BTW, your painting is KEWL !

[zapman]

Drorak, not sure what you mean, thanks for the feedback.
Mr Weasel, I like all feedback, Good and Bad its the only way i know what to change in my paintings. know what i mean? Yah the sand well its supose to be a New world (still on earth) but after a Nuke. thats why the sky is green and what not colors.

I cut down the Cliff at the bottom because it was taking away from Depth.

I will work on the sand more. and Have to Finesh up the kid on the sholders, yes i think the kids on the sholder needs to be moveed in as well.

thanks