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ilmi
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This is my attempt to draw female anatomy.. I posted something like this before.. only with his pants on.. but i spent more time on this one to make it more cleaner and sharper.. I received some constructive criticism for my previous work on how off my lighting was.. Please comment on that too and show me how and where to improve it..
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Zor
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| Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2000 1:47 am |
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imni, nice picture but you may want to bear this is mind. - Overall picture, the head too big for the body. - and also her ass, its more like a males ass due to the muscles and the curves, just make her arse more curvy. - also you may want to reomve that brick work, and put some white fogging in the background instead, cloud like then fade them away at the edges, it will look much better than brick work.. 
Otherwise good work.
//Zor
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| Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2000 5:00 am |
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| i'm not sure of the suggestions that you had, butthe key to makeing a good looking female is keeping it smoooooothno bi transition in color or things of the like,. and most definately smoooooth out the ribcage, she looks like she an anorexic fairy |
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Snake Grunger
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| Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2000 10:17 pm |
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I suggest you.. stop being a disgusting infantile pervert!
[This message has been edited by Snake Grunger (edited April 21, 2000).] |
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faustgfx
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| Posted: Sat Apr 22, 2000 2:42 am |
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eyes are frigged, too wide apart from each other
nose is tilted to right
mouth is crooked
right shoulder is odd, you forgot a few bones..
the breasts, well, i won't even go there
other than the left breast is alot smaller than the right one- which happens to be somewaht strangely twisted
the hip/stomache area..... eh, wtf is up with that? it's way too thin. way. then the ass. iwon't go there either. and the thighs..
okay
my advice is: go to www.sublimedirectory.com, stare through every picture that includes a woman (hopefully a woman anyway), stare stare stare, until you get the anatomy down... 'cause i assume you don't have a spare girl laying around in the back of your closet that you could use as reference.
not all hope is lost, though, the brick wall looks damn good.
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