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dr . bang
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 15, 2000 10:39 am     Reply with quote
Tell me what ya think. Thanks



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SaltyDog
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 15, 2000 10:53 am     Reply with quote
This piece has Alot of potential. I'm not sure if you're completely done with it, or what. The scarred metal is developing a very nice texture to it, but the green part of the body is a bit amorphous. I'd recommend going in and dropping some darker shadows in there and tightening up the clarity. (Right now the armor and green don't feel cohesive)
Same goes for the gatlin gun on his shoulder. Overall though, I think it could be a KICKASS piece
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dr . bang
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 15, 2000 6:38 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for taking a look at my pic and give me the suggestion, i really appreciate it although i want more people to see my post because i spent alot of time on this!
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 15, 2000 11:01 pm     Reply with quote
Hi Dr.Bang,
Yes i agree with SaltyDog. Gun has highlights in the hole? make it sold Black and Shade the Gun more,
Head looks good, I like how you tryed to put detail in!

Just keep going fix it up with more Dark values and Light Values.

ZAPmAn
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FatPenguin
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 16, 2000 1:54 pm     Reply with quote
i'd have to agree that it would look better with some more refinement... perhaps a more obvious light source, higher contrast between highlights and shadows
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Zor
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 16, 2000 5:01 pm     Reply with quote
Aye, seems no way complete yet, but has a lot of promise, Keep it up

//Zor


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zthee
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2000 1:29 pm     Reply with quote
hello

it could be a REALLY nice image when its done.
although now it looks kinda flat. more shadow might do the trick

regards
//zthee and kattii
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