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Topic : "Rotund Rhino. (Where did I put those nachos?)" |
SaltyDog
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 Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2000 1:13 pm |
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Hey, he can't help it, he's just got big bones....and a big gut, and a big ass........
Lay off the Twinkies!!!!!!
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PaK-RaT
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| Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2000 1:37 pm |
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-wicked drawing, the line drawing is excellent
-texture is very flat, it looks like u just slapped on a filter/texture and used the burn tool, needs more depth to the perspective shading
-shadow...make it volumetric, think about what type of shadow would be cast and do it right...big blobs are a cheap way out.
-light source doesnt match the shadow's direction...tweak one or the other (or both, i'd do both)
-give the contour lines some weight. in areas of pressure make the lines thin, in areas of shadow, make the lines thick.
-fantastic color selection
-bacground color...nice
-fantastic expression
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SaltyDog
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| Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2000 2:28 pm |
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| lol..I did this piece in under 30 minutes, in keeping with the quick style so prevalent here. I did it more as starting a new thread for unusual animals, but that's for the critique nonetheless. |
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Xcal
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| Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2000 3:10 pm |
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Schweeet!! Looks like a rhino Fat Albert. Diggit. I got a new pic up too, 'cept it's not a goofy animal.
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