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Darkynz
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Here's Smeagol, from the Lord of the Rings. This is my first attempt at digital painting, so I need some constructive criticism. Let me know what you honestly think.
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Aiko Ito
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| Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2000 6:36 am |
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wow thats kinda cute but scarey. Love the teeth, and eyes are starting to look good. The only major thing that disturbes me is the pointy top of his head. Maybe more rounded and define the glow on his head a little more.
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Tinusch
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| Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2000 10:02 am |
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| Awesome. That's amazing. And it's your first attempt at digital art??? Wow. |
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HumanClay
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| Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2000 12:07 pm |
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I don't see it either  |
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Tinusch
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| Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2000 1:43 pm |
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| Standard drill... Copy the link, paste it manually into your browser... |
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Darkynz
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| Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2000 2:39 pm |
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Glad you like it... yeah it is my first digital painting although i have done some 3D renderings before. I know what you mean about the pointy head, but i kinda thought that would make him look more strange... oh well. D'oh! Why isn't it showing up? Hmm here i'll try again... i'm not used to this UBB code.. i probably messed up the first time.
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Nex
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Darkynz
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| Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2000 5:23 pm |
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BTW  Crosswinds doesn't allow direct linking of their files. Someone will have to type in your URL, and then once your page is loaded, type in the image name after it...Then it should come up. Fortunecity (puke) and Geocities do the same thing...
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Darkynz
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| Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2000 5:26 pm |
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| AAArg. It would figure as much. Oh well... sigh... |
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Golongria
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| Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2000 6:00 pm |
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Ahhhh!! Somebody get a fire extinguisher!!! His head is on fire!!! j/k
Nice pic...i like the teeth....butter anyone?
-Matt |
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Tinusch
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| Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2000 7:08 pm |
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| Nex: Whenever there's a broken image link like that, right click on the "unavailable pic" pic, and click properties. Copy the URL and manually paste it into the Address bar. 9 times out of 10 that will work. |
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Ned
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| Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2000 11:52 pm |
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Very nice preciousss, I can't belive that this is your first attempt! My only small input is that the teeth look as if they're glowing. But cracking picture anyway!
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A spacehopper, a spacehopper, my Kingdom for a spacehopper. . . |
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