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RiLe$
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 9:43 am     Reply with quote
I seem to be the person this forum loves to flame but i am trying so heres a real pic i tried to make any ideas (besides grab a match)??
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 10:21 am     Reply with quote
hey, i'd say for you being 11 years old that's pretty good...
now that you've learned the airbrush-tool, i'd say go for dodge and burrrn and shade your picture !
just play with it (tip: ALT+click to toggle dodge/burn)..

post your improvements,
guybrush

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 10:47 am     Reply with quote
well i m 14 but i only have a mouse i dunno its my 1st real pic. but first i do wanna appologize to this forum for acting extremly immature and i hope to make it up in the future.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 10:56 am     Reply with quote
ooops, might have got something wrong...

anyway, keep on..
guybrush

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 12:01 pm     Reply with quote
i updated it but the link stayed the same i will try to keep this updated plz help me out with some feed back

[This message has been edited by RiLe$ (edited April 03, 2000).]
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 12:13 pm     Reply with quote
Riles is my brother...
He thinks his image is better then mine.. so he said to post mine and have everyone vote...
well -
- my first image also and i'm 13

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 12:54 pm     Reply with quote
well, the whole face seems to be slanted where as the ear is completely up right. the eyes and nose dont have depth at all. instead of shading around the contours of the head, consentrate on how the light falls on all the features of the face (look in the mirror). eyes usually arn't that slanted and people usually arnt yellow
it's a nice start.

ex.. shutup
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 12:56 pm     Reply with quote
well i kinda need some feed back which explains the 3rd post on my own thread so help me out
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 1:33 pm     Reply with quote
and 1 more question (as if i m not pissen u all off enuff ) i was wondering where dhabih was.. I m lookin forward to meeting him after hearing so much about him if ne1 now plz lemme no.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 1:37 pm     Reply with quote
Well, the proportions are a bit off... But besides that, the only thing I notice is that the shading is blotchy. To fix that, just use a bigger brush, and keep it on a lower opacity. Shade the areas lightly and evenly, and just keep working them over until they're as dark as you need them to be. The shading will look much smoother if you do it that way. Hope this helps.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 1:40 pm     Reply with quote
And Ex, both your images have their high points and their low points. They're your first images, from what I understand, so naturally there's going to be a long period of learning and improving. Don't start comparing just yet, as there's still a long road ahead for both of you. Just focus on your own skills and techniques. Don't try to compete, just try your best for now.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 1:51 pm     Reply with quote
thanx 4 the help
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 5:08 pm     Reply with quote
jeezus - Riley told me to post that.
Its not like i was competing with him.
So how about you shutup.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 5:18 pm     Reply with quote
no you shutup... my dad can beat up your dad :P
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 5:25 pm     Reply with quote
Uh, calm down Ex... My post was not derogatory at all. It wasn't even slightly negative. It was supposed to be ENCOURAGEMENT to both of you...
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 5:29 pm     Reply with quote
Dude i was talking to jeezus
He's being an asshole.
Whats your problem dude.. forget your prozak today or something?
Why should i shutup?
Riley is my brother and we were having a simple debate about or pictures.
We are both newbies.
Whats the big deal?? Jeez!
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 6:02 pm     Reply with quote
ex, you're throwing up post after post, most of which is just bullshit/useless babble.. not to mention you already started a thread with that same picture. this isn't a battle ground, no one is going to tell you which picture is better. beauty is in the eye of the beholder, no? yes.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 10:30 pm     Reply with quote
It's arguments like these that are the reason people are getting shitty with this forum.

Jeezus, don't be mean...

ex, go to your room...

RiLe$ and ex, both your pics are good, and both need work - take pointers from each other.

Co-operation! Today's letter is the letter 'E'... E is for Elmo!

*ahem*, excuse me...
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 04, 2000 3:03 am     Reply with quote
Hey Ex, I liked your image and decided to give it a repaint. Hope you don't mind I'm not happy with the result but I'll post it anyway



:: oscar
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 04, 2000 3:07 am     Reply with quote
well thanx 4 the help i think i will try to to do new art and post anything i think may be an improvement
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 04, 2000 3:13 am     Reply with quote
My posts arent usless, you just must be simple minded and find no use in them.
Oscar-Nice image man! i like how you painted it so cleen but i dislike the skull. And if everyone doesent mind it .. could ya call me Sean? thanks

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 04, 2000 4:16 am     Reply with quote
Some people must have "mix with 1 ounce of water and stir gently - a true little bitch'll come out" genes.

Ex, Sean, ease down... these people are here to help and encourage you, not to beat you down. This is a place of learning and not of fighting.

Peace,

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 04, 2000 1:54 pm     Reply with quote
Ok this thread needs to be dropped.
It's pointless...
And he was being mean to me.

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