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PaK-RaT
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 Posted: Sat Apr 01, 2000 11:52 pm |
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hi everyone 
im kinda new, i decided to make something nice for everyone to check out, kinda like our version of a handshake i guess
http://www.3dpalette.com/rebelxd/ross/linda_9_final.jpg
i would like some feedback, some constructive critism, "thats really nice' boosts my ego, but is non-the-less useless to my improvment, if u know what i mean...
lookin' fwd to hangin w/ u guys
lates...
PaK-RaT
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A.Buttle
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| Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2000 1:18 am |
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Her eyes should be lower than they are now. And, the line of the horizon that goes straight through her head is terribly distracting. Mayhaps distinguishing her more from the background will make the image more visually appealing.
Oh, and 3dpalette kicks ass.
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faustgfx
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| Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2000 5:26 am |
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hi pakrat.
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WildStyle
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| Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2000 9:27 am |
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| Nice Pic, but I agree, that horizon line through the head is very distracting. |
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WildStyle
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| Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2000 9:29 am |
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| Nice Pic, but I agree, that horizon line through the head is very distracting. |
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PaK-RaT
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| Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2000 11:25 pm |
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i corrected what u said, now it doesnt have that transleucent quality i was shooting for. as soon as i get access to easel.3dpalette.com i will post the correction. im working on a new sunset for a new illustration. i have a whole day b4 school starts again w00h00!
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PaK
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PaK-RaT
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| Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2000 11:48 pm |
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here is the correction...i didnt want to wait for access to my own site, sor RebelXD was cool enuff to help me out and post it...again.
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this is the first one
and this is the corrected one...
tell me what you now think upon compairison
[This message has been edited by PaK-RaT (edited April 02, 2000).] |
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