Sijun Forums :: View topic - celebrating member status with first pshop pic !!!

yesniyah · Posted: Sun Mar 26, 2000 9:37 pm

I'm a member!!! This is so cool. ANyway, I started this pic 4 days ago from a scan that I drew a long time ago. The one I drew is on my wesite under My Art.
It's not finished yet but here it is anyway. i'm having some problems with hair so he's gonna be bald until I get it right.

This is my first CG pic ever so rip it up all you want so I'll learn a thing or three. PEACE, LEO.

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Beast1284 · junior member Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2000 Posts: 47

leave the fucker bald...

kurisu · Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2000 4:32 am

I don't know big words like that f thing, but...

You said you're not finished and I don't know where you want to go with the picture, yesniyah (congratulations, btw

), but here are my comments...

I like his character. His posture. The jagged and bold anatomy. He's a bad mofo, fo' sho'!

If you haven't already, I'd work a little on his right hand, as it's less 'defined' compared to the rest of your pic.

Also, just a random idea would be to adjust the lighting a bit to enhance his 'badness.' I stole - I mean - grabbed your pic and just added some ugly shading... but maybe the idea will come across... imagine if there was a very bright light off right-center, and the light cut off quickly - and then a sharp colored light was off to his direct left... you might come up with something like this...

...and then you could just flush it if it tried to bite. Or something!

I'm tired! Just an idea to maybe spark something, anyway...

-k

PS: Oh yeah - great 1st digital pic man!

[This message has been edited by kurisu (edited March 27, 2000).]

yesniyah · Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2000 5:26 am

thanks for the idea. i knew I had to do something with the lighting but didn't know exactly what. Will try it and get back to you.
-LEO

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Spitfire · Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2000 5:37 am

Now that's one badass mofo. He looks like he'd fit right in the h@x0r Cr3W

*dead* L33t h@x0r : Spitfire bL0wZ g0@tz!!! j00 sUx0rZ!

/Spitfire...

P.s. But seriously : great work. I especially like the style in which you drew his mouth, and the muscles are perfectly over-the-top. 1T r0x0rz...ehm... i mean i like it

yesniyah · Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2000 5:48 am

damn, I gotta go to school now so i can't work on it till I get home.

But wait, there's more!!!

I have a 3 hr intro to CG class first thing today. I guess you know what I'll be working on. he he he

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A.Buttle · member Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1724

I've never seen Wolverine bald before, but he looks as bad ass as ever. I say leave him bald.

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ex · Posted: Tue Mar 28, 2000 12:24 am

I'd shit my pants if i say him comin at me!
But i think this monster needs something a little more "bad-assed" then a pair if jean's.
I thought you should give him something to make him a little more scary.
The belt should have something like a design of some sort on it. that would kick ass too.
I like the detail lines... nice shading... and is that a blunt hes smoking??

PS Make indents for his eye sack's.

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