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Gurb
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Location: Valencia,SPAIN

PostPosted: Fri Mar 10, 2000 5:38 pm     Reply with quote
This are some of the things I�ve recently in Photoshop. I used the airbrush with varying brush sizes on both images.The one called Rayolow was done after reading Frank Millers "The return of...", I know the composition is awfull, just wanted to know wether you find it reallistic or not.
Tell me what you think, please.
http://www.geocities.com/gurb_18/ojosaero2.jpg
http://www.geocities.com/gurb_18/Rayolow.jpg


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Tinusch
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 10, 2000 9:28 pm     Reply with quote
The first pic is awesome. I love the colors. The second one is cool too, but it would look more realistic if you added for glow and flash to it. Nice job though.
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Dakkan
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Location: London, England (Nationality: Belgian)

PostPosted: Fri Mar 10, 2000 10:07 pm     Reply with quote
Hey,
good work. the things i would work on though, if i were u, is the focus on detail/sharpness, and the contrast in colours. keep on practicing, and u'll get there.
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Brain
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 11, 2000 3:43 am     Reply with quote
Good stuff. The ojosaero needs a bit of work, mainly to add some detail. One thing that struck me straight away was that the eye looks very flat, when it should look like the eyeball is coming out from behind the eyelid. Try darkening the edges of the eyeball, and maybe even adding some eye lashes. Very kewl looking, keep it up. @:-)

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Gurb
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 12, 2000 11:14 am     Reply with quote
Thanks for the input, guys. You�re right, I�ll try try to make the eyeball look more a "ball" instead of a circle.
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