[Jyashuwa]

I can't decide if this is finished or not.
-Need ideas for the background.
-Does the metal look right?
-Should I touch it up more?
-How do you like the picture overall?
Thanks in advance for the feed back.

[Lemur-X]

I don't have much room to speak since my 'human figures' are pretty damn laughable, but I like the pic overall. Maybe add some really hard highlights to the metal, and tough up the top of the hair a bit. Just a bit. I like it. Redheads rock.

--Lemur-X

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[Giant Hamster]

the pic is hella cool, and the metal was fine other than it needed highlights and the pic needed some more defined lighting.
i played around a while and came up with this: its an idea to work from, i hope you dont mind me doing this =)

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[ArtKeo]

Loved the hair. You were able to paint the fine strands. Did you use a tablet to paint? Or did you use some other method?The same goes for the shirt or clothe she's wearing. Nice patterns on them.


The shadows and light shines on the hair do not seem to match the rest of the piece.It would appear that your light source is from her left. But, perhaps this is due to because you might want to add more touch ups to it.


Yeah, I think you should add some shines to the metal arm and parts to further enhance the feeling of it being metal. Like what Giant Hamster did.

Those were just my opinions.

[This message has been edited by ArtKeo (edited March 03, 2000).]

[zapman]

Like Lemur-X, add more highlights the 2nd Image look much better,
As for the Hair in the second image you made it, Darker (lighting) the Hair really stands out too much Darken it.
Remember REFLETED colors, show some red on the metal, I see you have some one the face, but add some more to the neck, arms, hint of Red.
Love the pose, face looks good.

overall out of

ZAPmAn

[This message has been edited by zapman (edited March 03, 2000).]

[Jyashuwa]

Very kewl
I love the feedback on this site.
-I like what you did Hamster, especially with background. I'll post a revised version and see what you think what you all think.

[fragamite]

-you need more contrast
-shinier metal. this looks like plastic. pretty intense highlights and sharp shading with completly black parts schould do the trick.
-you need to redo the right arm. she has no elbow, it doesn't really look like an arm. also it looks like the schoulders are connected at the front of her torso. hmm.. but on secod thought, you probably want her to shrug a little bit like that.
-some shadows on the face to make it more interesting
-some parts of the metal arm are too blurry. add detail
-add shadow underneath the chin
-the line where the hair meets the face is a little to sharp and straight

hope you understand what I mean, it's a good pic. but some clean up and more definition is needed. good luck !